Date: May 17, 2016 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Strong Icelandic Women
Love Edda. It's nice to find a friendly Icelander. Justin seems to have a way with people. The shopping was interesting, but I've got to wonder where they plan on staying and how they'll carry around all their new clothing.
Date: May 14, 2016 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Strong Icelandic Women
Hiya Edda,
Read the first two chapters.
Nicely done. The people in your story really come to live. And not unlike the great Tagsit you really know how to sell your country.
You've got a real good feel for the English language and there is a great sense of fun
If ever I have the chance to get to Iceland I'm certain I'm going to like it.
The rest of the story I will read during the weekend leaving reviews in my wake.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response:
I glad you like it !
Tag did help me a lot with grammars in the beginning, but mostly I needed the push. The last half of the chapters were done without her help since she was busy writing her own story and those may not be perfect... but they are ok even if I say so my self.
I hope you get to come to Iceland anad make sure to contact me if you do!!
Edda