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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2017 1:34 am Title: The Broken Condom

You have to admit that this storyline was one of the most difficult ones to watch.  Your reworking of it is interesting. But the thing I get most out of this is that Brian did not lie to Justin yet he kept insisting that he was wronged.  Sadly the condom broke, but at least Justin hadn't been fucking around or had he?

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2017 12:52 am Title: The Broken Condom

I loved everything about this chapter, I loved how angry Brian was at Justin for not listening to him, but I totally understood Justin's reasonings.

And omg, the topping was HOT.

Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2017 1:53 pm Title: The Broken Condom

This story was ... compelling.  I found myself quite tense and worried while I read it but feel it was exactly as it should be.  I really liked that Justin was "forced" to accept that he was not as grown up as he thought he was and that even though in some ways he could recognize the mature thing to do, in other ways his youth belied his ability to act maturely and without selfishness. As always I am glad that Brian and Justin ultimately found a way to be together again, something that Season 5 seemed unable to work out for us viewers. Another one of your stories that I have thoroughly enjoyed and hated to finish 🙂

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2017 1:58 pm Title: The Broken Condom

Hi again! After reading “Monogamy” I was looking forward to this new story, although the description has made me a little afraid. I don’t mind mpreg (I even liked it in some stories), but I always suffer if the two hurt each other too much…

Really good start. And again, a scene in the show where they should have talked a little bit more… I love your idea that Brian would’ve followed Justin to Vermont. And what should I say… I love your writing-style, how you characterize them (and stay in character), how you let them fuck each other (it’s so hot) and also how you let them talk with each other. – “I was there all day, every fucking day, until you were out of a coma, and then I was there every fucking night. I knew your progress in therapy better than your own fucking mother, speaking of whom, she told me that if I cared about you, I'd leave and never come back. I think you're smart enough to figure out what it meant . . . what it means . . . that I complied with her wishes." – I’ve always imagined it to be a little bit more romantic, but it suits them. :-)  And if Justin hasn’t known or felt so far, now, he would have to understand how much he means Brian, how much Brian cares…

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