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Reviewer: Shaz254 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2019 3:03 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

Brilliant story. I enjoyed every part.

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 9:18 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

This was so wonderfully written and thought provoking. So many of Brian's personality traits are explained within the alters. All I can say is WOW!

Thank you for sharing your work. I can't wait to read more from you.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 5:24 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

Re-reading this because I like to torture myself and because you are amazing. 

Reviewer: charming1 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2016 9:37 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

Giving this excellent story a third read. Can hardly wait to go on this emotional journey again!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2016 2:50 am Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

I've read this before and shall have the pleasure of reading it again here.  Where does Cynthia think he's at.  If anyone would know it should be her.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2016 8:29 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

Wow, I love this story. I read it in one shot and I'm yearning for the next chapter.

Justin already has "murder" in his mind for Jack, I guess he now has another reason with the so called "best friend". The next reason will be when he meets with Cynthia and she tells about the link between the 3 events.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 2:04 am Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

loving this story - always thrilled to see a story delve into that thing that is the mind of Brian Kinney and experience it in a whole new way - and this is definitely new - and intriguing - and truly insightful -

I get excited every time I get a notice of a new chapter - and am on the edge of my seat for more

thank you

Charle



Author's Response:

I remember the immense support you gave me when I was originally writing this back in 2014. I'm so honored that you've continued to enjoy the story. :) 

Reviewer: later2nite Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2016 4:14 am Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

I've mean meaning to read this, Roni. I love this first chapter so much.



Author's Response:

So glad you are liking it. I will warn you that it is very angsty (but no original character deaths!). Let me know how you like it as you go on. 

Reviewer: charming1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2016 2:33 am Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

I am so happy to see that you are posting this story to our site, Roni! I LOVE this one soooo much. I am a sucker for Brian-in-peril stories, where we get to really explore him and that complicated brain of his. The plot is spectacular, and... I just can't say enough good things about it!!



Author's Response:

Wonderful to be here! This was my 'virgin' foray into fiction, actually, and I was stunned that so many readers liked it. Honored and humbled.  And yeah, that boy is crazy complicated! 

Thank you for the very kind words. 

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2016 2:10 am Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

I love this story



Author's Response:

::Doing happy dance:: 

So glad you like it! 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2016 10:37 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

WOW!!! THIS.... This is one of the first stories that drew me into fanfic! Thank you for sharing it here!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

THAT is an awesome compliment, Nichelle! Thank you and I'm humbled. ::blushes:: 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2016 10:31 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

I loved this story the first hundred times I read it, and I love it just as much the 101st time :D It's so angsty, but you capture it perfectly. I can't get enough of this.

FINE, I'll read it again :p



Author's Response:

LOL... I'm testing you on this! Pencils ready? ;) 

Really glad you like it so much. Thanks! 

Reviewer: Saje Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2016 10:23 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

WELCOME! I am so very proud and Honored that you chose to house this story with us. I am doubly grateful to you, as you were the first to really take the time to read and comment on my story. Your reviews were the only thing keeping me going for a long time, and I still re-read them to this day.

Thank You for putting your trust in us.

SAJE



Author's Response:

Thank you for the warm welcome! I'm so glad to be here and think this will be a booming community very quickly. And I'm honored that my review of your work touched you. That's very, very nice to hear. ;)

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2016 10:22 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

Have I mentioned before how much I LOVE this story. Even with all the angst. It's just so amazingly intense and the way you get into the minds of the various personae is amazing. One of my all-time favorites! Kudos! TAG



Author's Response:

The real problem was getting them OUT of my head when I was writing this! This was the first piece of fiction I ever wrote. Ever. And it literally took over my life while I was writing it. I'm glad you like it SO much!!!! ;) 

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