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Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:28 pm Title: The house that Jack built

HELP HIM, ALICE!

Reviewer: charming1 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2016 3:31 am Title: The house that Jack built

Brian needed his "family" after Lindsay, Gus, and Justin all left, but they abandoned him. Bastards. They all assumed that he was so strong, but now they're all finding out that Brian isn't the brick wall they thought he was.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2016 2:38 pm Title: The house that Jack built

Damn, I hate to think what it was that Jack did that caused this.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 2:51 pm Title: The house that Jack built

this chapter just tears me apart - Brian's anguish - Justin's feelings of guilt and betrayal - all so intense and gut churning - and its like we are there

I think this is one of my most favorite things right now about this site - I am spending time reading stories posted here, one at a time - and reliving moments while seeing something new on each page - the best of the best revisited yet fresh - what a treat!

so, while I can hardly stand Brian's pain - still I can't wait for each new chapter

Charle



Author's Response:

This is the beginning of the heartbreaking discoveries for Brian and Justin. Gotta love Alice, though. She is now Brian's savior. 

I suffered for years from night terrors as an adult and the description of Brian in the dark is from my own experience with those terrors. Absolutely, paralyzingly terrifying. 

Thank you again so much, Charle. 

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