Reviews For Alterations
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Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2016 3:21 am Title: What have you done today to make you feel proud?

I know I have reviewed this story...somewhere...before, but I couldn't resist doing so again.

I was always haunted by that line, "...but I don't remember anymore" and Brian's face as he said it. This story brings so much to what could have been.

I love the directiion the author took and this remains one of my favorites of all time!

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 9:18 pm Title: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

This was so wonderfully written and thought provoking. So many of Brian's personality traits are explained within the alters. All I can say is WOW!

Thank you for sharing your work. I can't wait to read more from you.

Reviewer: augusta70 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 1:27 am Title: What have you done today to make you feel proud?

I finished this one a day or two ago and needed time to formulate my thoughts about it, it got to me that much.  It puts my favorite character in such a new situation than what we saw in the show, but completely believable and true to who he is.  The writing was so vivid and the voice so strong that I could absolutely see it all playing out in my head. This one will stay with me for a long time, and I'm good with that. So powerful, so moving, so educational. Thank you for writing this and for sharing it.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2016 12:41 am Title: What have you done today to make you feel proud?

Hands down my favourite story. Always will be. It's just so fucking beautiful. I literally have to read it a couple of times a year if not more, just to go through all these emotions again. You, my friend are amazing. 

P.S sorry for spamming you with reviews today. Anything to stop me from packing lol

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2016 12:35 am Title: Sometimes the forest is right there

You nailed Debbie PERFECTLY at the end. I hated how she always called him asshole or slapped his cheek. She loved him yes, but she never showed it in the right ways. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2016 12:21 am Title: Dance when you're perfectly free*

IN YO FACE, MIKEY!!!!

I love Trick <3

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2016 12:14 am Title: Fly, fly, fly so high

Little Boy could rest...

TEARS, SO MANY TEARS.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2016 12:08 am Title: Quid pro quo

Melanie and Lindsay are THE DEVILS in this. But Ha, I love how asswipe is in hospital. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 11:58 pm Title: Battle royale

Justin is so fucking strong in this, I am so proud of him. And I have so much hate for Mel and Linds, and don't even get me started on Michael.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 11:48 pm Title: At the sound of bugles blaring

*hugging my computer screen tightly*

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 11:34 pm Title: My body remembers

I'm so fucking proud of Brian right now I could vom.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 11:21 pm Title: Can you reconcile a dichotomy?

The fucking kings :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 10:30 pm Title: A war dance

Brian's statement/quote was amazing lmao

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Date: Sep 22, 2016 10:30 pm Title: A war dance

Brian's statement/quote was amazing lmao

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 10:15 pm Title: Knowing changes everything

He can't catch a fucking break!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:58 pm Title: With malice aforethought

AND THAT MY FRIEND, IS HOW IT'S DONE. Emmett = <3

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:50 pm Title: Do you remember when we were best friends?

Ahhh! Seriously, Michael needs to DO ONE.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:45 pm Title: Once there were kings

Can your heart actually bleed? Because mine is right now x

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Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:36 pm Title: Say it out loud

FUCKING, JACK. Seriously, why am I reading this when sober? lol

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:28 pm Title: The house that Jack built

HELP HIM, ALICE!

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Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:15 pm Title: Go ask Alice

I need me a glass of wine while I read this.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:09 pm Title: A suggestion of plaid shirts and Bibles

Our poor baby is so confused :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:00 pm Title: A Perfect Puzzle

I really fucking hate Michael right now.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 8:42 pm Title: I'm not him

Can I wrap him up in cotton wool now, please?

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 8:34 pm Title: Intangibles

Serious,y my need to cuddle both Brian and Justin is now intense. Is it silly I am slightly angry at Deb for not realising sooner? :(

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