Date: Dec 29, 2022 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow, this was a great story!! I was kept on the edge of my seat from start to finish!! Even though Michael didn't get his comeuppance that he so needed, at least he ended up on the short end of the stick. Brian, Justin and the kids made a life together with Emmett, Ted and Cynthia helping out a long the way. And Michael became the outsider, the one who nobody wanted anything to do with. I guess he got his comeuppance after all.
Date: Aug 13, 2019 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 15
did read it again
Date: Aug 29, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
Who is MM? I like your conclusions. I'm just sad that Michael didn't get any punishment for hurting Justin like that.
Author's Response:
Sadly the bad guys don't always get what they deserve. Maybe next time.
Date: Aug 28, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 15
So I was waiting for you to finish this before I read it. Honestly, I'm reading so many that are ongoing that it tends to get confusing. Needless to say I spent the entire afternoon reading it. Every emotion in the book is involved in this one. I go from being completely gutted to really thrilled and totally beyond imfuriated at times. GAH!!!!!!!
Everything those boys went through, thank goodness it all worked out. but they sure went through a lot. On top of that, I totally hate the girls. Everyone else whose been abused and such are adults, but those two...the abused children! they neglected children...No fogiveness what so ever.
Michael too. He needs to go down. all fine and dandy that he's being turned away from the firehouse, or the Ben and Hunter left him. He can excuse all those things and work around them too. what he did was sick and he needs to pay for it. BIG! Beyond disappointed in Ben though. I mean WTF?! He actually excused michael's actions? My jaw dropped on that one! Deb...well too little too late really.
Emmett of course was a dream and LOVED that he played such a major part. I always thought that there should be a deeper friendship between he and brian.
the kids will have a road ahead of them. Hopefully alex is on speed dial. ;) the family though will do all they can to make sure those 2 kids come out of all this as unscathed as possible.
Great fic!! Enjoyed it thoroughly.
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you! This was such a wonderful review. Glad you liked it.
Date: Aug 28, 2017 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
is it possible for there to be a sequel to this? I'd love to read more of this world... so good... loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your kind comments. 
I'm working on it.
Date: Aug 26, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
I just finished reading this for the second time. It was thoroughly enjoyable.
Now, how about continuing from the ending? I love a good Greg!
Carol
Author's Response:
Working on it.
Date: Aug 26, 2017 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh no, you can't stop the tale here! It's too soon.
Author's Response:
Sorry. I find if I don't stop and wrap things up it could go on forever. lol
Author's Response:
Sorry. I find if I don't stop and wrap things up it could go on forever. lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2017 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 15
Love a happy ending!
I love that you kinda left the ending open to continue with a mpreg story. It would be a hoot to have Brian pregnant.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It could be Brian, could be Justin, could be Emmett! You never know.
Date: Aug 26, 2017 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wonderful story! So glad there was a happy ending and that Michael is out of their lives! Well done!
Deb
Author's Response:
Thank you. I love happy endings.