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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 10

I need to find Michael and give him a proper throat punch for what he caused... what a fucking douche!

Justin has regressed so much, and it's because he felt cut off from everyone!

I hope to hell that Michael is happy for himself... because that's how he should end up... Ben doing nothing to stop him is unspoken permission and acceptance of his behavior... that's is unacceptable!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, and I hope you like my solution.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 9

I'm sad that Brian has to have surgery again, but happy to know he will NOT be alone this time.

I hope Em is able to get the boys back together.. Brian is always happier with Justin and I think Justin is always happier and more creative when he is with Brian!



Author's Response:

I agree with you.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 8

Fucking Michael... and Debbie's lack of class (and always believing her son must be right if he says something) ruins a perfectly good night... I'm sure Mikey, jealous as hell, ran to his mommy and said Brian was off fucking Justin, so she automatically believes him and makes a scene...

Brian REALLY needs to remove both of them (mostly the shit head Michael) from his life! that's the first step to better health and sanity!



Author's Response:

I think you're right.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

I can't believe Deb and yet again her spawn can ruin something so quickly... Deb isn't malicious at least, whereas the same cannot be said for Michael.

He had better not try to ruin the Housewarming!



Author's Response:

No guarantees.  Evil laughter.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

OOOOOOhhhhhhhhh, the firehouse is going to be amazing!  and hmmm, could MM be the Mysterious Marilyn working her magic?  Sweet!

Still not sure why Mikey is being such a dick, especially with asking about Justin, but I'm guessing (and hoping) you'll be getting to that part later :) 



Author's Response:

I hate to say this but Mikey didn't ask about Justin out of the goodness of his heart.  He knew how much Brian missed him and how hurtful it would be.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

yup... Em and Ted are a force to be reconed with! No second thoughts, just protect mode.  And Mikey thinks it's ok to spike a drink even knowing the consequences of what he did?  he is just an asshat!



Author's Response:

Let's just say that Michael's thought processes defy imagination.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

Again... I miss Justin terribly, but I'm so glad Brian has Emmett, Ted and Cynthia on his side... with that trio, he has enough support... and I'm glad he's accepting it!



Author's Response:

I know.  I was stuck for months trying to figure out how to get Justin in there and keep up the suspense.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

Michael thinks it will do Brian some good to spend time in jail?? and he still thinks of himself as his best friend. How does Ben put up with this imbecile. I hope Cynthia sues the hell out of him, but I'm a little sad that Justin isn't involved :( 



Author's Response:

I know!  What kind of best friend does Michael think he is.  I could only think of the time Brian had problems with Kip and Michael's advice.  Arrggh.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

I just love Emmett and Brian being friends.  I think if given the proper chance and time they would be great close friends. they are both so.... tall! lol



Author's Response:

My thoughts exactly.  LOL. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

What the fuck is Mikey up to??? drugging Brian and then the fire? I don't like coincidences, so I'm guessing the best friend had more to do with it than we know so far (I'm so not a Michael fan, so if this turns out to be Michael is an asshole, I'm ok with that lol)



Author's Response:

A story needs a bad guy and Mikey is it.  He makes it so easy.  

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 5:41 am Title: Chapter 6

I love the firehouse for the new home! And that MM has got to be Mysterious Marilyn! Lol 😆 And what is up with Mikey!?!



Author's Response:

I thought it might be a good idea.  Who else but MM would know that Brian would buy a firehouse?  I should have but an anti-Mikey warning but I couldn't figure out how.

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 5

I love how Emmett and Ted are looking out for Brian, especially since Mikey is acting so strangely... actually, he's mostly in character. Yikes! *rushing off to read the next chapter*



Author's Response:

To me Mikey seemed in character so I'm happy you think so too.

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:59 am Title: Chapter 4

Brian has a good group of friends around him, unexpectedly as Cynthia, Ted, and Emmett.



Author's Response:

I hope they are.  Personally I love them for being on team Brian.

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:50 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh wow... that Michael... he means well but he sure riles everyone up.  I'm glad that Brian wasn't charged but it doesn't sound like his health is too good at the moment. I'm glad this story is completed so I can find out what happened! :)



Author's Response:

But does Michael mean well?  At least you won't have to wait to find out.  

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:40 am Title: Chapter 2

LOL, awww, Brian was appreciative but he is a clothes horse, after all. :) I'm sad to hear that the loft is gone but he can rebuild with the insurance money. I can just imagine Brian in the green suit, with a black tie maybe? Yum...



Author's Response:

I'm afraid you haven't taken into account the best friend.  You'll see in the next chapter.

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg, this is so good... I wonder what is up with Michael??



Author's Response:

Don't we all wonder about Michael, the Best Friend.  I just never saw him as that.  Thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: CarolK1943 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 15

I just finished reading this for the second time. It was thoroughly enjoyable.

 

Now, how about continuing from the ending? I love a good Greg!

 

Carol



Author's Response:

Working on it.

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved the ending. It leaves the  door open for so many possibilities. Can't wait to see what happens next in this universe. 

 I always love an anti-Michael story.  It's always good to see him get his in the end. 

  Seeing things through Emmett's  eyes was very enjoyable  and gave the story a different twist. 



Author's Response:

I love Emmett and he has such a way of seeing things that tickles me.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh no, you can't stop the tale here! It's too soon.



Author's Response:

Sorry.  I find if I don't stop and wrap things up it could go on forever.  lol 



Author's Response:

Sorry.  I find if I don't stop and wrap things up it could go on forever.  lol 

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 15

Love a happy ending!

I love that you kinda left the ending open to continue with a mpreg story.  It would be a hoot to have Brian pregnant.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  It could be Brian, could be Justin, could be Emmett!  You never know.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wonderful story! So glad there was a happy ending and that Michael is out of their lives! Well done!

Deb



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I love happy endings.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2017 3:04 pm Title: Chapter 14

A broken leg is no fun, but it could have been worse: the head, the back, an arm or both...

Emmett is right to inform Ben and Hunter so they can see what is really happening with Michael.



Author's Response:

Brian lucked out, sort of.  Yes, Ben and Hunter finally know the truth.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2017 1:56 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hmmmm. What has Michael been doing? Very curious. TAG



Author's Response:

One more chapter and all will be known.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 13

At least, the kids can see that Brian isn't the monster Mel had them believe he was.



Author's Response:

Yep, Brian has turned into an okay kind of guy.  

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 13

Poor Gus & JR... TAG



Author's Response:

Yes but now that Brian, Emmett, Ted, Cynthia and Justin are backing them things should go better.

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