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Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 7:45 am Title: Chapter 12

Love that vid of Randy. TAG



Author's Response:

Isn't it great!  Randy is so much fun to watch.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 7:24 am Title: Chapter 11

Thank goodness Em found Gus & JR. TAG



Author's Response:

Yes it is.  I'm sure they were not where or how he expected to find them.  

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 6:20 am Title: Chapter 10

Looks like Brian & Justin need each other pretty badly... TAG



Author's Response:

Something that everyone knows Brian and Justin need each other.

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Date: Aug 24, 2017 6:11 am Title: Chapter 9

Uh oh - Brian's health is getting worse... TAG



Author's Response:

Yes, after what happened at the housewarming his health took a turn.  Something else to blame on Deb and Michael.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 6:04 am Title: Chapter 8

Yay that Justin's here finally, but boo for Michael & Deb ruining the party. I loved the layouts for the two bedrooms though. Thanks for adding the pics! TAG



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like them.  Descriptions couldn't do them justice.  Yes, Michael and Deb made fools of themselves and don't even realize it. 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 5:41 am Title: Chapter 7

The finished house sounds great. TAG



Author's Response:

It was fun looking for unusual things for it.  Shame Brian wasn't floating in money.  

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 12

Finally caught up here to review.

This story catches you after the first sentence.  I love the way you kept Michael canon perfect but with a small twist. (which if you really watch, Michael could have done the same thing on the show)

Emmentt and Ted prove that they are the true friends of Brian in the preceding chapters.

And I would really love to see Cynthia go all evil on Michael ass.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!  I've always wanted to see if I could do Michael the way I saw him in the series, but I can't resist twists and turns.  I always felt by the end of the series Ted was close to Brian and wanted to put Emmett there as well.  Cynthia doesn't have the time to go all evil on Michael, but I don't think he'd survive.  I enjoyed your review especially that the story caught you after the first sentence.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

It's really getting worse for Justin, but he's not alone anymore; Daphne and Emmett are with him.

How Gus will act/react when Brian will arrive?



Author's Response:

I couldn't leave out Daphne and Emmett is so helpful, seeing what really is.  You'll have to wait to find out how Gus deals with things.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 7:29 am Title: Chapter 6

Great choice of a house for Brian! TAG



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  With a bath house for an office he'd have to go for something unusual.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 7:18 am Title: Chapter 5

Nice Mysyerious Marilyn sighting! TAG



Author's Response:

I love Mysterious Marilyn and couldn't resist putting her in this.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 6:36 am Title: Chapter 4

Glad Brian at least has Cynthia, Ted & Em, but... TAG



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They are his core support system.  

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Date: Aug 23, 2017 6:29 am Title: Chapter 3

Damn Mikey. I hope Cynthia does press charges! Idiot! TAG



Author's Response:

Now that would have been wonderful and cut off most of the story.  lol.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 2

Lol! I love Emmett taking Brian under his wing. And he actually owns an Armani! Who could have seen that coming! TAG



Author's Response:

Emmett has more in common with Brian than one would think.  He also has an outlook that Brian will benefit from.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 6:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Boy, that starts off bad for poor Brian. I'm hoping it gets better... TAG



Author's Response:

It might take a while but yes, it does get better.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 11

What a mess the girls are living in! Why have they returned all gifts for Gus? To have him hate his father?



Author's Response:

Well this story was For Better...or Worse.  I decided to give the girls the worst.  LOL.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 10

It's strange that Justin was able to go to Pittsburgh from NY while he has/had no money to pay his rent.

Jennifer wasn't aware of his arrival, so, does it mean that Michael paid for the travel? It's weirder that Justin accepted knowing Brian was supposed not wanting to see him again.

But, what's worrying is that Justin is out of medication and in a very bad emotional state. Brian was right on time.

The other worrying thing is the breast cancer: which stage is it?



Author's Response:

There is a lot that went on with Justin that nobody knew about.  Michael was behind the scenes being malipulative.  As to Brian's breast cancer, you are the first person to ask.  They caught it early, thank goodness.  Actually I looked into a lot of different cancers and this one struck me as being the twist in the plot that this story needed.  Thanks for all your comments.  : - )

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 11:51 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh god...mikey is such a shit..bastard...em is such a darling..i love him...brian is lucky he has a friend like em.

Cant wait for more...u r awesome write...keep sharing ur talent with us...thank u very much.



Author's Response:

You are so sweet.  I've grown fond of Em and he sometimes gets into my head to tell me what to say.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 11:46 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow...the new home of brian is awesome...poor brian..feeling soo bad for him...justin has changed...what happened to him.



Author's Response:

Yes, his home is awesome.  But the mystery is what happened to Justin and why Michael seems to know so much.  Guess he isn't as stupid as we thought.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 7

I guess brian is happy now...somewhat?!!!



Author's Response:

Working on his new home with the help of friends will indeed made Brian happy.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 11:16 am Title: Chapter 6

What is this mystry ?? Is it justin or someone else?? i am soo curious now.

Thanks for the chapter.



Author's Response:

The mystery is how someone would know that Brian would buy the firehouse and had plans drawn up for renovations.  The who I'll leave up to you.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 11:16 am Title: Chapter 6

What is this mystry ?? Is it justin or someone else?? i am soo curioua now.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 10:24 am Title: Chapter 5

What a loser...em and ted are great friends for brian.

Thanks for the story really like it.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it, that makes me happy!

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 10:15 am Title: Chapter 4

I love cynthia...she is one of the blonds whom brian trusted the most.



Author's Response:

Yes, I was thinking her a better friend than Lindsay.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 10:10 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow...the whiney mikey is such a rat...poor brian..this is going great.



Author's Response:

Yes, Mikey is whiney and a rat.  Hmmm, that's a story idea!  Thank you.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 9:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg...thats an awesome start...wow..wtf is going on here...mikey is giving me the creeps here...thats one interesting plot..i like it.

Thanks for posting.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I was in a what can Michael do to piss me off mood.

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