Date: Aug 20, 2017 2:29 pm Title: Chapter 9
Maybe if Justin was aware of the cancer he would be back; would Brian be OK with that?
Someone should at least tell Debbie to shut up; Carl could try; he is the only one she would listen.
Author's Response:
I'm sure you're right, but he's been out of touch with everyone. Getting cancer again can make anyone rethink the things they did the first time around. Debbie, I'm afraid won't listen to anyone. She thinks she's right about anything. Reminds me of my mom. lol.
Date: Aug 20, 2017 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
What a party pooper this Michael! At least, Justin has been able to "test" the bed; the swinging must be fun.
Author's Response:
I had fun messing with Michael and Deb. I had planned for it to be worse, but my memory is bad that I forget what I'd planned. But I loved that bed and now Justin sees what he's been missing. I know what Brian and Justin are thinking, but if I tell you now it might ruin future chapters.
Date: Aug 20, 2017 2:45 am Title: Chapter 8
Soooo.... I am completely confused by this chapter. Somehow Michael gets Justin to show up at this party and then totally gets away with whatever reason he did it? Causing his clients to leave for unknown reasons? Hmmm...I truly don't get this turn of events.
Author's Response:
I wanted to bring Justin back and who to be responsible for it better? At this point they don't know why Justin showed up and only later find out. But basically I wanted to get Justin into the story.
Date: Aug 19, 2017 4:53 am Title: Chapter 7
A light and angst free chapter: will it last? Now that Michael knows the new address, I doubt it.
What an irony to get a firehouse after having his loft burnt down!
Has Carl a clue on who did it?
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the lovely reviews. I never thought about the irony. You'll find out what happened in a later chapter.
Date: Aug 17, 2017 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
What an amazing building! I so see Brian living in there. With these height and volumes, he could do wonders and, like Kinnetik's building, it's out of the box.
There are so much possibilities.
I guess Mysterious Marilyn could be behind this surprise.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was going for something different, though I'm sure a firehouse must have been used by someone. I like to think that MM does indeed stand for Mysterious Marilyn.
Date: Aug 16, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Emmett is so protective of Brian and he's not even the best friend.
I loved the end.
Author's Response:
He's the friend Brian should have had. Thank you for all the lovely comments. : )
Date: Aug 16, 2017 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
I agree with Cynthia about Michael and I'm glad that she sees Emmett as who he really is.
Author's Response:
Cynthia is learning that Emmett is a man of worth and responsibility. That he'll do whatever he can in Brian's best interest.
Date: Aug 16, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Whoa! The cops arrested Brian even if they didn't know for sure what happened?
So glad Emmett statred to put some pressure on Michael and to let him know Cynthia could come after him and she will love to just do that, after years of listening to his constant whining.
I hope he will also let them know what he has seen in Babylon; they sure could trace that on the videos and also in Brian's blood; it's maybe not too late.
Author's Response:
I know but one cop hearing Michael and look what happens. Emmett's decided he's not giving Michael a free pass anymore.
Date: Aug 16, 2017 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Emmett and Brian seem to get along; without the usual banter they have. It's true that Brian doesn't feel like himself.
Author's Response:
I think it was a surprise to both of them that could actually co-habitate. Having the cancer back has brought about changes in Brian.
Date: Aug 16, 2017 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing beginning: I want to kiss Emmett and Ted and already want to kill Michael.
What has he done and what has he planned? Nothing good, if he started by spiking his best friend's beer, while Brian has his cancer back.
Author's Response:
In he does it all in the name of friendship. With friends like that who needs enemies. Emmett and Ted are finally seeing things the way they are not through Micky and Deb colored glasses.
Date: Aug 15, 2017 2:01 am Title: Chapter 3
So far, the fic looks like it is going to be an interesting story.
Poor Brian, at least he is out of jail. The security tapes proved his
innocence. At least he has three friends, Cyn, Em and Ted. It is
just about time we called in blond troops, well troop Brian needs
him. It will be interesting what happens next. I will hold my rant
about Michael for another time. But Michael sure is ##^^$#@!.
DavidR
Author's Response:
And he gets worse.
Date: Aug 14, 2017 8:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Exciting to see a new YumYum story! YAY! TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you : )
Date: Aug 13, 2017 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definitely looking forward to reading this again!!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy it as much the second time around.