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Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2020 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 2

I promised i would do better about giving feedback to writers,,,,,this is the fourth or fifth time i have read this series and I laugh each time. It is brilliantly funny and endearing ...I am sure I will read it again and again !

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

Brian and Justin should improve their vocal communication, otherwise they are going to face the "guru of love". As for the physical communication, they are in sync.

Michael shouldn't use "like"; it's only funny when Justin does it.

Justin shouldn't underestimate his genes: his kid could be an artist or as anal as Brian.

And if they both become active parents, the kid could have a great personality, nurtured by the huge influence of each daddy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 2

Michael is the one who needs help.  Everyone else is doing fine.  At least their marriages aren't boring.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 5:20 am Title: Chapter 2

Awesome...like every story of urs..great work.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 4:12 am Title: Chapter 2

Sabotage in the wilderness.

Here comes the moron squad.

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