Date: Dec 13, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
This is getting more mysterious by the chapter. I have no idea why Justin is still hiding.
Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
I love that food was what tempted him out lmao, BUT THE BOY IS SO SKINNY :( But they met ahhhhh. I love how caring Brian is being, while also still being furious with Craig at what he's done to Justin.
Them talking over chat app was brilliant, and I love how Justin asked him why he was doing this, like he was scared but he had to know.
Date: Sep 24, 2017 11:45 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
The ghost might be human, but his look and shape isn't, which isn't surprising with his surviving conditions. At least he came out and didn't leave after the dinner.
Date: Sep 23, 2017 11:56 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Yesssss !!!! Justin's here I love that ! Thank you TAG your story is amazing !
Date: Sep 23, 2017 5:12 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Hey ...that was awesome update...loved it..poor justin that pathetic excuse of father craig must have tormated sunshine ..he must have trained justin not to speak just like he did not wanted him to sing in choir...by force...gosh soo many theories running in my mind...soo excited to know what u have planned ...update whenever u want ...we will read happily.
Date: Sep 22, 2017 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Hey ...that was awesome update...loved it..poor justin that pathetic excuse of father craig must have tormated sunshine ..he must have trained justin not to speak just like he did not wanted him to sing in choir...by force...gosh soo many theories running in my mind...soo excited to know what u have planned ...update whenever u want ...we will read happily.
Author's Response:
It's so easy to hate Craig, but the Craig in this story is especially bad. Evil bad. TAG
Date: Sep 22, 2017 5:28 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Hey ...that was awesome update...loved it..poor justin that pathetic excuse of father craig must have tormated sunshine ..he must have trained justin not to speak just like he did not wanted him to sing in choir...by force...gosh soo many theories running in my mind...soo excited to know what u have planned ...update whenever u want ...we will read happily.
Date: Sep 22, 2017 5:14 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
How about that! Brian has a slightly different kind of ghostwriter! LOL
Yay! He convinced Justin to come out of the walls and join him. But OMG... it sounds like Justin needs a lot of help. And Brian is just the man to give him that help.
Figuring out why he is still hiding is a very big challenge!
Deb
Date: Sep 22, 2017 1:31 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Great "first contact!" I like how much bolder Justin is when talking to Brian on the tablet... he seems almost like the Justin we know. Yet, when he arrives at the dinner table, it's obvious that this Justin has some serious issues.
I am very curious to find out just how long Justin has been living like this... did he willingly go into hiding to avoid confrontation with Craig? Or was he forced into exile by Craig? And why did he remain in hiding after Craig was gone? Ooh, there are so many questions rolling around in my head!
Don't know what I'm going to do without a new chapter to read tomorrow night. :'-(
Date: Sep 22, 2017 1:30 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Tag,
PTSD.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
You're partly right . . . TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
So far so good. Sharing a bed might be nice.
Author's Response:
You're really jumping ahead, LOL. Justin can't even talk to Brian yet, so I think it'll be a while before they're in the same bed. Then again, you never know . . . TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2017 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Haha of course it would take food to get Justin out of hiding lol But the poor thing! So unhealthy, hollowed cheeks and bony. Brian will fix that right up. I hope Justin talks to him next chapter. At least they were in the same room and started communicating. And just for the record, I LOVE your enthusiasm!
Date: Sep 21, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Loving this, their first proper meet, sweet and gentle. Look forward to more.
MissMerlot
Date: Sep 21, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Justin is out Yeh !!! So sweet
Date: Sep 21, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Great story, as usual from you Tag! Really enjoying.
Theory: his father had him convinced that he was to blame for his mother and sisters deaths and maybe abused him so he it traumatised. He stays in hiding as he thinks everyone will think he is a 'bad' person and maybe brainwashing about being gay from Daddy Homphobe.
Breath is bated for next chapter
Ta
Deb
Author's Response:
Good theory. You might have something there . . . TAG