Date: Dec 13, 2017 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Maybe he can't talk? Or he is afraid to do it.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I LOVE how Justin's smiley face was bolder than his original one, you could see how (albeit slowly) he was learning to become human again - even if it was over messenger.
It's so cute watching them learn to be around each other, and for Brian to actually enjoy the quiet "relationship" they have going on, he didn't think he would, but he does. He realises he was lonely, and that just having this quiet kid around eases that feeling a little.
OMG, I was not expecting that ending, and when I read it, I was so sure Justin would run, but he didn't. He stayed to watch, Can't wait to see what he makes of it.
Date: Sep 25, 2017 2:00 am Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I think it's great that Brian feels the need to "protect" his house's and his Ghostboy's honor!
Poor Justin... that reaction to a simple touch and the constant self-deprecating way he speaks about himself. If you hadn't already killed Craig, I would happily do it!
Date: Sep 24, 2017 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Hot and funny chapter! I didn't think the take out would be this kind, but with Brian, we can expect some variant.
I loved this quote “I do not mind a threesome,” the Indian Take Out spoke up. “But is he not a bit young.”
Theory for Justin not speaking: he was forbidden to talk by his father, therefore, he found new communication media or he considers his voice is the reason his mother and sisters are dead, therefore, he shouldn't use his voice anymore to avoid new disasters.
Date: Sep 24, 2017 3:52 am Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Wow! That was hot!
Deb
Author's Response:
Lesson: Never write fanfic while eating tandoori chicken with curry. LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I wish Brian can talkwith Justin one day, because it seems that Justin was beaten, isolated, verbally emotionally abused, It's difficult for him to trust someone; An indian can help ? Are you sure ? Thank you for the update !
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 5:32 am Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
OHH...MMMYYYY....GOOOOODDDDD...what was that?? I thought..forget what thought...this one was better than that...lols...amazing chapter...indian takeout seriously ..that was too funny name for a indian trick...i am totally not offended by the way...lols.
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 3:03 am Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Tag,
Great chapter.
Justin also suffers from emotional abuse.
It's also possible that he is unable to speak after not having done it for so long.
~Lorie
Date: Sep 22, 2017 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Yeah that was interesting...to say the least! Wow! I'd say Justin was definitely beaten, isolated, verbally & emotionally abused, neglected and his father probably locked him away for a period of time too. I wish Justin would speak to Brian in person...maybe soon.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Loved this one so funny. Can Justin even talk?
Author's Response:
Yes, Justin *CAN* talk. But will Brian be able to do so? That's the question. TAG
PS. Go out and have some Indian Take Out of your own tonight! LOLOLOLOL.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I like Emmett's attitude. What happened to Justin that has him so shell-shocked?
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I thought maybe you had a craving for an Indian type male? :-)
Author's Response:
Well, that too . . . LOL. TAG