Date: Dec 14, 2017 11:11 am Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
That pie looks amazing. Why did that electrician come over that early? I wanted to see some action.
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2017 11:15 am Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Great chapter! I love the morning scene.
What could be the horribly "bad" thing Justin did ?
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one !
Thank you TAG !
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2017 1:18 am Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Oh yeah this story is getting soooo good, can’t wait where you lead us...what could Justin have done that was so bad....or done TO him...hmmmm. Love Brian written like this... “Brian Kinney gives a shit!” ðŸ˜
looking forward to more, Erin
Date: Oct 04, 2017 12:10 am Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Great chapter! Absolutely loved the morning wake-up scene... It's as if Justin had no issues or insecurities at all. Very clever the way Brian so gently got Justin to loosen up at dinner. But what could possibly be the horribly "bad" thing Justin did or thinks he did????
More please... and not just pie! ;-)
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
NOOOOOOOOOOOO. I am all caught up. This reminds me of when I first found your stories and read 23 chapters in one night and was up until about 4 reading haha.
Oh man, they were SO close to getting it on, damn you, Shanti.
I loved Brian's "three" theories, it helped Justin relax a little, but when Brian hit the nail on the head, my heart broke. Just thinking about Justin being forced to live down there makes me wanna cry. And how he is going on and on about being bad :(
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Yum. I want that pie! Now the only thing I could think of is if Justin shot Craig and he'd be doing the world a service if he did.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Tag,
Great chapter.
Love the Princess Bride quote too.
Write fast.
~Lorie
Date: Oct 03, 2017 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Poor Brian my ass! Look at that pie! Jesus I'd eat it all! lol Love love love their little morning session...more! At least Brian now has state of the art wiring throughout his house, yay. I bet Justin's input made his book even better. So glad he's starting to come out of his shell, the poor thing. He must have been through horrible things. Shanti seems like she knows her stuff...girl power!
Date: Oct 03, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Brian has made progress without even trying too "hard": his ghost was glued to him and didn't go away after awaking. The only tough part is when he wants answers.
Considering how Justin reacted in the first meeting the improvement is huge.
Can't wait for the next night...
Happy writing!