Date: Dec 14, 2017 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
So this is how he ended up in there. Totally sucks.
Date: Oct 19, 2017 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Phewwwwwwwwwwww!!! That shower scene was HOT *fans self*
But omg, my heart hurts for what Justin went through with Craig. I feel strangely proud of how he handled it all though, and how he opened up to Brian. He may not have been able to tell him those things face to face, so him having somewhere to write down what happened must have helped him. Brian hugging him at the end was so beautiful, yes, he may not be a huggy person, but they both needed that contact, they needed to know the other was okay, and that they had each other. Again, all stuff that can't be said (by Brian) with words.
Date: Oct 19, 2017 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Yeah, a shower scene!!! Damn hot!
We finally get some background from Justin: pretty disturbing, but Justin is healing. And he now knows that Brian won't throw him out.
Date: Oct 19, 2017 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Love all the backstory on Justin, it show us us a lot. I thought things were goiing to get more heated in the shower & afterwards too. I love the juice!!! More juice! Damn Real Life! It never stays at bay does it...hope you're okay TAG
Date: Oct 19, 2017 11:44 am Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
That a great chapter TAG! Poor Justin what happen to him is horrible !
Thank you for the update !
Date: Oct 19, 2017 2:31 am Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Damn, the thing is I can see this actually happening.
Author's Response:
Thank you. That's one of the best compliments ever to a writer of fiction. To be able to write something believable is our highest achievement. Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Tag,
Poor Justin. At least now he has Brian.. You need to write more fast. This story is great.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thanks, Lorie. I have the entire rest of the story all written out in my head . . . now if I can just get a break from RL long enough to get it all down . . . TAG
Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Wow. Totally sad and believable.
Author's Response:
The 'believable' comment made my day. Thank you. That's what I always strive for. TAG
Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Ah Great chapter, boys are getting closer and Justine is opening up. Next chapter please please. I enjoy this story
Author's Response:
If you could turn off Real Life for me for about a week, I could get this story wrapped up no problem. LOL. But, in the alternative, you'll have to bear with me while I try to find a few minutes a day to write in between RL crises. Sorry. TAG