Date: Jun 09, 2021 3:04 am Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
No. No real surprise 😂 but again... The dialogue is fantastic. You have managed to put together a story filled with horror AND lol humor. But more importantly, you gave them a way to start this relationship away from friends and family. To actually get to know each other.
also love that your putting in those Little e thingsfrom the show.
🥰
Date: Jun 09, 2021 3:04 am Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
No. No real surprise 😂 but again... The dialogue is fantastic. You have managed to put together a story filled with horror AND lol humor. But more importantly, you gave them a way to start this relationship away from friends and family. To actually get to know each other.
also love that your putting in those Little e thingsfrom the show.
🥰
Date: Jun 09, 2021 3:04 am Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
No. No real surprise 😂 but again... The dialogue is fantastic. You have managed to put together a story filled with horror AND lol humor. But more importantly, you gave them a way to start this relationship away from friends and family. To actually get to know each other.
also love that your putting in those Little e thingsfrom the show.
🥰
Date: Jun 09, 2021 3:04 am Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
No. No real surprise 😂 but again... The dialogue is fantastic. You have managed to put together a story filled with horror AND lol humor. But more importantly, you gave them a way to start this relationship away from friends and family. To actually get to know each other.
also love that your putting in those Little e thingsfrom the show.
🥰
Date: Dec 14, 2017 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
Oh wow. I never would have guessed that.
Date: Oct 27, 2017 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
HOLY FUCKING SHITCAKES. I was all ready to start telling you how much I love this new dorky side of Brian, when BAMN, Justin admits to killing his dad. What the HELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL????????
Author's Response:
I thought that might surprise you. Lol! TAG
Date: Oct 27, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
Even if it was a possibility that Justin killed his father, we still don't know what pushed him over the edge.
First, he had to have access to a gun, which, in the US, could be quite easy.
Secondly, his father must have done or said something drastic to get Justin to act like this. This is not his nature to attack.
So, you still have to surprise us...
Date: Oct 27, 2017 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
What a great dinner. Love all the teasing Michael stuff. lol I figured Justin killed his dad but seriously it was clearly self-defense, after all the years of abuse. Wonder how Brian will bring up actually speaking to a lawyer about this to ease Justin's mind.
Date: Oct 27, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
OMG ! But everyone think that Craig shot himself ! What reaaly happened ? I can't wait for the next chapter !
Date: Oct 26, 2017 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
Woah. You surprised me. I had hoped that I was wrong, in fact I still hope I'm wrong. Maybe he missed and his dad died of fright?
Date: Oct 26, 2017 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
I knew it....but why did everyone think his father shot himself? Where was he shot? You better get that next chapter posted fast LOL