[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2017 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Ice Breaker.
Excellent chapter...thank u for the update.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2017 11:19 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Ice Breaker.
Thank you for this chapter with Gus ! He is the link !
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2017 8:01 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Ice Breaker.
Excellent chapter...thank u for the update.
Date: Sep 25, 2017 4:16 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Ice Breaker.
Gus is a great icebreaker and his daddy is hot! But that's an obvious fact.
The more time Justin spends with Gus the more Justin will talk and act like everything is OK.
How the munchers will react when Gus will explain what he has done and with whom?
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Ice Breaker.
Love how Gus brings out the best in both Brian and The Boy in the Wall.
Date: Sep 25, 2017 2:18 am Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
Yay! A sunshine smile! I found the Facetime interaction so sad... the idea that Justin has been living in the darkness behind the walls for so long.
Date: Sep 25, 2017 2:00 am Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I think it's great that Brian feels the need to "protect" his house's and his Ghostboy's honor!
Poor Justin... that reaction to a simple touch and the constant self-deprecating way he speaks about himself. If you hadn't already killed Craig, I would happily do it!
Date: Sep 24, 2017 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
Facetime! Great idea Brian! I think Justin is definitely warming up to Brian but I wonder what it's going to take for him to be able to give him a simple hug. The poor thing is so traumatized by whatever shithead did to him...at least Brian got a couple sunshiney smiles! Mint chocolate chip...my favorite!
Date: Sep 24, 2017 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
Brian's patience is rewarded: he got smiles and words, spoken words!
Brian got more than he needed at the store: Sue Ann really wants to win the game "Who got to hug/touch the hot stud".
Date: Sep 24, 2017 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Hot and funny chapter! I didn't think the take out would be this kind, but with Brian, we can expect some variant.
I loved this quote “I do not mind a threesome,” the Indian Take Out spoke up. “But is he not a bit young.”
Theory for Justin not speaking: he was forbidden to talk by his father, therefore, he found new communication media or he considers his voice is the reason his mother and sisters are dead, therefore, he shouldn't use his voice anymore to avoid new disasters.
Date: Sep 24, 2017 11:45 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
The ghost might be human, but his look and shape isn't, which isn't surprising with his surviving conditions. At least he came out and didn't leave after the dinner.
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2017 11:27 am Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
Sue Ann is very funny ! i love this ovely and sweet chapter !
And Justin speaks maybe later he can do more, I count on Brian LOL
Date: Sep 24, 2017 9:13 am Title: Chapter 10 - Gift Exchange
Justin has been treated worse than a dog by his father and always heard he was not worth anything; he also thinks his mother and sister are dead because of him.
Either his father threw him out and Justin came back in because he knew he could hide in the house or his father locked him in the hidden place, but didn't know there were other ways out. Justin may be a "sissy", but as every adventurous boy and girl, he might have played in the house while younger and found some secret door and liked to hide to get some peace. Maybe he started to "build" his nest behind the walls and decided to stay here, protected and peaceful. Maybe Craig thought it was a ghost and drunk too much to forget. Maybe Justin didn't know his father was dead and didn't want to get out of his cocoon.
The only way to get Justin out is like you do to tame a wild animal: food, trust, patience, repetitiveness and kindness.
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2017 5:36 am Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
Soo sweet ...lovely chapter....brian got struck by sunshine smile...lols.
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2017 4:09 am Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
It looks as if Justin is getting use to having someone to talk with even if he won't say much. What's next on the menu?
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2017 4:07 am Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
Tag,
Good to know his sexy boy can talk.
Maybe they can do more than talk soon.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
OmG I'm in love with this story
Date: Sep 24, 2017 3:53 am Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
Way to go, Brian! Got Justin to actually say a couple of words! Awesome!
Gotta love Sue Ann; hope she gets to meet Emmett! :)
Can't wait for more!!!
Deb
Date: Sep 24, 2017 3:52 am Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Wow! That was hot!
Deb
Author's Response:
Lesson: Never write fanfic while eating tandoori chicken with curry. LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I wish Brian can talkwith Justin one day, because it seems that Justin was beaten, isolated, verbally emotionally abused, It's difficult for him to trust someone; An indian can help ? Are you sure ? Thank you for the update !
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 11:56 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Yesssss !!!! Justin's here I love that ! Thank you TAG your story is amazing !
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 5:32 am Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
OHH...MMMYYYY....GOOOOODDDDD...what was that?? I thought..forget what thought...this one was better than that...lols...amazing chapter...indian takeout seriously ..that was too funny name for a indian trick...i am totally not offended by the way...lols.
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 5:12 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Hey ...that was awesome update...loved it..poor justin that pathetic excuse of father craig must have tormated sunshine ..he must have trained justin not to speak just like he did not wanted him to sing in choir...by force...gosh soo many theories running in my mind...soo excited to know what u have planned ...update whenever u want ...we will read happily.
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 3:03 am Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Tag,
Great chapter.
Justin also suffers from emotional abuse.
It's also possible that he is unable to speak after not having done it for so long.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Hungry Ghosts
I sighed with relief when the freezer opened and there was no body in there LOL.
Is anyone else in love with DIY Brian? Because the thought of him knocking walls down and installing windows is just too damn hot.
Aw, Mikey did good bringing our boy some of his favourite Thai food, love that the brownies went missing - but trust Brian to not think about how ghosts wouldn't need food LMAO.
Sue Ann must be so happy Brian has moved into town. EYE CANDY.