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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Tool Time.

I don't know what could be in the freezer; I just hope it's not a body; it would be too weird.

There is a body hidden somewhere, but a living and caring one.

The tools belt was a great idea! Kinky...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Visitations.

Hell yeah! And I would be on his other side with my hand on his thigh...
If he had been able to call his new girlfriends, they wouldn't have left and they would have a heart attack seeing him naked!
It was better this way: his ghost was able to come out of his closet.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 9:42 am Title: Chapter 7 - Visitations.

I would love to have neighbors like the Quilting ladies! It was really very funny and the ghost is really very attentive : Haha Thank you for the laugh !

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 1:49 am Title: Chapter 7 - Visitations.

 

Tag,

Great chapter.

You would not have been just sitting there just rubbing his thigh, but I won't comment further on that.

Justin is so sweet to him. Can't wait for them to meet.

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 1:36 am Title: Chapter 7 - Visitations.

Ha! Those ladies are something else! 

A little mothering from Debbie, with an assist from Justin... it's everything Brian needs to feel better!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 7 - Visitations.

Elderly ladies bringing sickness.  How cruel.  At least the ghost is taking good care of him with the help of Deb.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 1:12 am Title: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans

This just proves that no matter whether in this realm or another, Brian and Justin are made for each other.

I think it's hysterical that Brian has just shrugged his shoulders and decided to make friends with his "ghost," to the point of giving him sex tips, LOL! I also love that Brian lets Justin pick items he wants from the boxes, and lets him borrow the tools, (What IS Justin building?) but warns him about stealing the good lube! Just great!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Visitations.

No TAG, that was me, Gloria & the one in the story, rubbing my ample thigh up against him! Lmao and I definitely am handsy lol omg I loved it! Tell me please, are all the quilting ladies after people you know? You are too much! Thank God for Deb! Knowing when to come to the rescue with chicken soup and medicine & knowing when to leave...awwww sweet long haired angel Justin watching over him. Is it going to be awhile before they really meet?



Author's Response:

Actually, yes, all the Quilting Ladies are based on my mother (Penny) and her real Quilting club. I met them all this summer. What a bucnch of rowdy old dames. Lol. Not sure if they would actually rub Brian's thigh . . . But I wouldn't put it past a few of them. Lol. As for when Brian will meet his Angel/Ghost boy in person, well, I'm not telling. 😁  TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans

Yeah Justin is certainly getting a good education. I'm sure we'd all watch Brian masturbate any chance we could get. That was hot TAG! Whoa...more please lol

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 11:49 am Title: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans

Whaou that it's a sexual education ! I hope that Justin learns his lesson Brian is a good teacher ! It's really funny, thank you for this update.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans

Justin is such a tease.  Wish Emmett and Ted came face to face with him.  Ted who doesn't believe and Emmett who does.  That would be fun.  Wonder if Barney ever shows up.  Do I sense Michael telling tales out of turn?

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans

HOLY HOTCAKES

*takes a shower*

Also, LOL imagining a ghost doing carpentry lol



Author's Response:

Brian takes his ghostly educational duties very seriously, you know. LOL Also, Justin is a very industrious ghost. Wait till you see what he makes with all those tools. TAG

PS. In part this is based on a story I heard over the summer when I was visiting a 'ghost town' called Jerome, AZ. They have a restaurant called the 'Haunted Hamburger'. When they were renovating the building, the construction crew kept losing their hammers. Then, a day or two later, all the hammers would turn up in a stash in another room of the building. They also heard hammering noises in rooms where no one was working. And some photos of the building they took for marketing purposes when they were just opening, show weird ghostly images. If you're ever going to central AZ, you should check the place out. They also have really good hamburgers. 

 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles

Way to go, Sue Ann. We'd all do the same LOL.

I love how that one picture has completely taken over his mind and influenced the way in which he's written his story.

 



Author's Response:

Plan on seeing more tof he Quilting Ladies. They all have a crush on our Brian, and I think they will be visiting him quite often so they can flirt some more. LOL. TAG

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans

You were right: sexy and spooky!

The ghost is getting more and more adventurous: daring stealing Brian's favorite dildo...

It's great that Brian isn't angry and afraid anymore: he is slowly, but surely taming this gay ghost.



Author's Response:

I'm afraid Brian's ghost is a very naughty one. Brian will soon have him in hand though - Brian's an excellent teacher when it comes to gay life. LOL. TAG

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans

 

Tag, 

Hot chapter. 

You need to get this story going (more sex).

Can't wait for them to meet.

~Lorie



Author's Response:

It's not easy coming up with gay ghost sex scenes, you know. LOL. I'll work on it. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 10:32 am Title: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles

What a funny banter with Sue Ann! Brian is in for some handy jobs, not in a life affirming way...

Too bad he doesn't want to start the renovations with the kitchen: I bet there is some secret way hidden near the baking hutch.



Author's Response:

I'm having a lot of fun envisioning all the Quilting Ladies and how they would fawn over our Brian. Plan on seeing more of them. Poor Brian! As for the kitchen reno . . . if he started in that room, my story would be very short. LOL. TAG

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 3:39 am Title: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles

 

Tag,

Love the picture you used. 

Can't wait to see how you tie everything together.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response:

I love that picture too - it's really the best young Justin pic out there! TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 2:46 am Title: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles

Brian slumming in a gas station food mart is just too perfect! And Sue Ann... I immediately pictured Betty White as Sue Ann Nivens! I have a feeling Brian might be doing kitchen renovations sooner than he planned.



Author's Response:

IKR! I can just see Brian being forced to buy his food in a gas station. LOL. Glad you like Sue Ann - she's based off one of my mother's friends that I met in AZ over the summer. I can just see her flirting outrageously with someone like Brian. And, yes, Betty White would probably be the actress to play this part in the movie that will inevitably make. TAG

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A Penny Worth of Thoughts.

God bless. Penny for sharing all that she knew, my heart is so sad thinking about what that poor family went through - and what happened to their son? Why was he shipped away AND TO WHO? And there might be bodies buried in the backyard? AHHH!



Author's Response:

Penny is based on my mother - she would probably have been flirting with Brian too, don't you know. And of course it was a sad story - that's par for the course when you're talking ghosts, right? lol. TAG

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 1:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles

Thank you thank you, I can't stop laughing !!! Nice pic of Randy well Justin !



Author's Response:

You're welcome. Making you smile and laugh makes me smile too! TAG

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A Penny Worth of Thoughts.

i love the story and now i love Penny ! Waiting for little Justin hahaha



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you liked Penny. The character is based on my mother, which means I should be able to write her pretty well. As for Justin . . . well, we'll be seeing more of the 'Ghost Boy' sooner rather than later. TAG

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 2:03 am Title: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles

Sue Ann...another fun lady from town! I have a feeling Brian is going to be adopted by all the older ladies lol.

I'm happy that Brian took a break to write. I knew Justin would answer his plea for a picture! And Of course it gave him inspiration to write more. Sounds like quite the novel.

i wonder how long it will be before Brian starts to look for a "body" but discovers a beautiful blonde boy who is very much alive. I wonder how that will go lol.

love this story and can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Plan on seeing more of the Quilting Ladies . . . They all have crushes on our Brian and it's going to be hard to keep them away. Poor Brian.  As for finding poor Justin's body, that would be very traumatic for Brian, don't you think? And gross. But, you never know WHAT Brian's going to find in that messy basement and crowded garage, do you . . . . TAG

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 2:00 am Title: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles

I think I know what is going on , but I'll wait and see. Pretty interesting so far.



Author's Response:

*Shhhhhhh - don't tell the slower readers* LOL. TAG

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 4 - A Penny Worth of Thoughts.

Penny is a hoot! She's very sweet. Love her!! What a tragic tale she told Brian about the Taylor family. Brian didn't seem to make the connection between Penny's description of Justin and Gus's description of the blonde boy living in the wall. I'm sure he was very overwhelmed at what he'd just been told. I do hope that Justin makes an appearance soon. I'm very curious why he didn't come out of hiding after Craig offed himself. I'm thinking (hoping really) that isn't a ghost lol!



Author's Response:

Penny is based on my mother and she certainly WAS a hoot. I can just see her giving a handsome man like Brian a hard time. LOL. As for our ghost boy - I think Brian has put the fact together that Justin Taylor is probably the boy Gus saw in the walls . . . But, after listening to Michael and all the locals' stories about how Justin must have been killed by Craig, can anyone blame him for believing he has a ghost in his house? I would too at that point. TAG

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 1:44 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Boy In The Walls.

Leave it to Gus to shed a little light on the mystery, he is so darn cute! Mikey was quite funny with all his theories. I suspect it's Justin hiding out in the walls. I'd say he's definitely a little mischievous lol. Love this story!



Author's Response:

Ghosts seem to always appear to children first, don't they? TAG

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