Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:12 am Title: Chapter 26 - You Just Never Knew
Thanks Tag for another excellent story! And I'm sure no one saw that ending coming you twisty witch! Looking forward to the next one,
Deb
Date: Oct 30, 2017 12:33 am Title: Chapter 26 - You Just Never Knew
Well well well, look at you TAG! Another one bites the dust huh? Bravo my friend! Loved it! Great cover story, Ted is brilliant! Too bad we didn't see Mikey's head explode! Lol
Author's Response:
Maybe next time for that exploding head thing? Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it. TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2017 12:32 am Title: Chapter 26 - You Just Never Knew
You've ended this on a good note. Love how Teddy came to the rescue with his detective skills. Being a numbers guy helps. Loved this story from beginning to end.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 26 - You Just Never Knew
Teddy to the rescue!
I don't think I'd consider Brian to be a murderer... it was more of a mercy killing. But I'm glad he was able to calm Justin with the story.
Wish we could have stuck around for the coming out party with the Quilting Ladies though, LOL!
I'm already missing this story...
Date: Oct 29, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
OK, so waiting to read both chapters tonight saved me from the first cliff-hanger, but not from this one!
But I loved the dinner at Deb's and Justin's imaginative disguise... but I'm glad that he waited around until after the car was fixed, and that he finally got all of that guilt about Craig out in the open.
Now, that second cliff-hanger...
Date: Oct 28, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
Loving this story! Perfect timing for Halloween, and love our resident Ghost and his BOYFRIEND, cant wait to see where you take the rest of the story! Candy
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2017 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
So what happens next?
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2017 11:20 am Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
Poor Justin now we understand his ordeal! I can't wait to see how Brian is going to convince his boyfriend to come out with him since Craig's death is a suicide so case is closed.
Thank you for the update, amazing story TAG
Date: Oct 28, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
Wonder how the guys are going to get Justin out of the house and not jail. Got to be some way legally
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2017 12:24 am Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
Tag,
Now Justin need to explain to the quilting crew where he's been all this time. They will come up with something. Great story.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
My heart actually hurts for Justin and for what that asshole did to him. In my eyes, he had no choice, but I am so proud of how Brian is handling this.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
HOLY FUCKING SHITCAKES. I was all ready to start telling you how much I love this new dorky side of Brian, when BAMN, Justin admits to killing his dad. What the HELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL????????
Author's Response:
I thought that might surprise you. Lol! TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Heads Explode
I actually really liked prankster Brian, it was still ALL him, but he's relaxed since he's moved to the country, our boy is growing up.
LOL at him sitting on Justin's lap and Justin calling him heavy :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Hiding Out.
OMG, those quilting ladies are a HOOT, and I love that he called them "my quilting ladies," I don't know why that makes me smile so much lol.
Brian painting in just his sweatpants, HOLY HELL!!!!!!!! Just the thought makes me need a cold shower lol.
I hate how afraid Justin is of being discovered, but there has to be more to the story.
Date: Oct 27, 2017 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
Who did Brian murder? Why not say Justin just came back from somewhere out west maybe, and met Brian when he went by to see the old house. Everyone thought he was gone so let them .
Author's Response:
I think you’ve been reading ahead in my brain again. . . Lol. TAG
Date: Oct 27, 2017 8:18 pm Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
I wouldn't call him a murderer. He was a victim for years. Of course Brian still cares...hello? He's his boyfriend!
Author's Response:
You have to say it like Brian - BOYFRIEND - LOL. TAG
Date: Oct 27, 2017 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer
Now that Brian knows, they need to find out how to get Justin to go back to the world of the living as he can't hide forever.
Date: Oct 27, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
Even if it was a possibility that Justin killed his father, we still don't know what pushed him over the edge.
First, he had to have access to a gun, which, in the US, could be quite easy.
Secondly, his father must have done or said something drastic to get Justin to act like this. This is not his nature to attack.
So, you still have to surprise us...
Date: Oct 27, 2017 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
What a great dinner. Love all the teasing Michael stuff. lol I figured Justin killed his dad but seriously it was clearly self-defense, after all the years of abuse. Wonder how Brian will bring up actually speaking to a lawyer about this to ease Justin's mind.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
OMG ! But everyone think that Craig shot himself ! What reaaly happened ? I can't wait for the next chapter !
Date: Oct 27, 2017 1:57 am Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day.
Im just about to start chapter 6, I cant wait to see where you take the story! Ghosts, or perhaps a blond wall boy and a mystery novel!! Its off to a great start! Lucky me!! Candy
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2017 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
Woah. You surprised me. I had hoped that I was wrong, in fact I still hope I'm wrong. Maybe he missed and his dad died of fright?
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2017 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 24 - After Dinner Debacle
I knew it....but why did everyone think his father shot himself? Where was he shot? You better get that next chapter posted fast LOL
Date: Oct 26, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Heads Explode
The reunification was great and funny; they are intimate in so many ways.
The part with Michael was hilarious: the "honey" and "sweetie" were so in sync, even if they didn't rehearsed the scene before.
Can't wait to read about the gang's reactions. Emmett will be delighted, Mel and Ted will wait to see, Lindsay will be in her passive/aggressive mode and Deb will be happy for Brian.
Date: Oct 26, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Hiding Out.
They work so well together, they are very agreeable companions.
The scene with Brian's girlfriends was wonderful: teasing and entertaining, Brian was in his best role. The result was quite unexpected regarding Justin. A few more secrets to unveil.