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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2017 2:09 pm Title: Final Curtain

As bad as Michael is, I didn’t expect him to be the killer.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2017 1:16 am Title: Final Curtain

Ethan Gold such a wimp always was a dick now a murder

Author's Response:

 

Fantgirl,

Ethan just had a very sinister look, couldn't put anything past him.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2017 3:27 am Title: Final Curtain

No you got me.



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Wellreadbunny,

We were trying to keep everyone guessing on who the murderer was.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:27 pm Title: Final Curtain

Thank God Tim got away. I hope Ethan will suffer for his crimes.



Author's Response:

 

SandyGale,

Ethan will get what he deserves.

More soon.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Final Curtain

What a stupid man. Insyead of moving on with his life he let his bitterness get the better of him. Is that a tear I'm shedding? Nope just cutting onions.

Good thing Molly bought him to Brian and Justin so they could get him set up at the shelter. But like any kid he doesn't listen when told not to go off by himself. He was lucky.



Author's Response:

 

Sophiesmom,

Some people just let the bitterness consume them.

He was very lucky, and thanks to him the murderer was caught.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2017 8:12 pm Title: Final Curtain

Oh my.  That was a surprise. I was so sure that it was Michael.  But Ethan is a good choice.  Glad Tim got away, because Molly would have killed someone if he hadn't.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

If it was Michael, he would have been caught the first time because he likes to brag.

Molly would gladly go after Ethan for what he did do to Tim.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2017 7:42 pm Title: Final Curtain

GOOD for that damn chin-rat!! And none of the evidence is circumstantial; not one piece of it can be explained away leaving reasonable doubt! Oh I am so excited, even though I feel bad for Tim having to be in close proximity to that piece of vermin. I wish they would leave Brian in the room with that heap of cow dung for five minutes so he could deliver the ass whipping that has been a long time coming.

Now that that's over, in a sense at any rate, is there any way possible that Michael can be accidentally-on-purpose pushed down a manhole? His comments last chapter were just atrocious! At the very least, he should either have his vocal cords ripped out or end up gumming his food for the rest of his life. Ignorant troll! 

Great job kicking up the angst and suspense factor in this chapter! I won't deny being tempted to scroll down to the end to see who/what was revealed. But I remained strong and am so HAPPY that I did!

Looking forward to MORE! Happy writing and HUGS,

~Chelle



Author's Response:

 

Chelle,

The weasel loses more in the next chapter.

He couldn't be the murderer, this is a prequel to BP and he shows up, however briefly.

More soon. <3

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Final Curtain

Yeah, I guessed it could be Ian! What do we win if we guessed?

I hope it's not the end soon.



Author's Response:

 

Sno,

Check the chapter dedication.

Only a few more chapters.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

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