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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2017 3:26 pm Title: All That Remains

So glad Debbie still didn't give up and found out who the first two boys were... so sad.

 

Glad Mikey disappeared into the ether and Ethan got exactly what he should have.. .still delusional and blaming anyone but himself!

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2017 1:40 am Title: All That Remains

I know a family who threw out their HIV positive son as a teenager, my son's boyfriend who did not come out until his mother died. Being ashamed of you are used to make my son crazy. Some of this still exists it is so scary!!!!!

Author's Response:

 

Fantgirl,

It's sad and scary to think that you can't even tell your family who you really are.

Children should be loved and accepted for anything that they can't control. It's ridiculous to think that anyone would choose to be something that their family refused to accept. I can't imagine doing that to any child.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2017 3:29 pm Title: All That Remains

I have read the 7 chapters. First I thought the murderer was Michael he is so childish making others responsible for his  miserable life and it's ian !!!! He deserves much suffering for what he did to these young men 

The shelter is really a good idea thanks to the family of Liberty Avenue. And thanks to you Ladies for this great story !

You are a wonderful team ! Waiting for the epilogue !



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

Michael is angry and childish but he is all about being able to brag and that wouldn't be something he could brag about.

The chin rat has several lifetimes to reflect on what he did and the suffering he has caused. Prison won't be fun for him.

The shelter will be a great thing for everyone.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2017 3:56 am Title: All That Remains

Ian is a nasty guy; he should at least shut his mouth.

The foundation is a great idea to rescue some of the lost boys.



Author's Response:

 

Sno,

The chin rat thinks very highly of himself and expects everyone else to feel the same way.

People who care want everyone safe.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2017 9:36 pm Title: All That Remains

This was a great update.

Michael just couldn't face growning up and being. a responsible adult.

Ethan can't handle not being someone's all. Maybe he'll enjoy prison life. Can form an orchestra of convicts.

Looking forward to epilogue.



Author's Response:

 

Sophiesmom,

Michael only sees himself and his wants and needs.

Hopefully Ethan will get what he deserves in prison. 

An all violin orchestra, they can call themselves the Tortured Cats.

More soon.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2017 8:41 pm Title: All That Remains

I can't help feeling that Michael isn't innocent.  That first murder has his name written all over it.  Deb gave it to him straight and he merely asked if she was going to leave the food?  It's nice to see how everyone is working out.  Can't wait to see what your last chapter tells us.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

Michael doesn't have the balls to actually kill someone, he is all talk.

He may wish he could hurt Justin and Brian but he would never do it.

He is a narcissistic bastard, only thinking of how to get things for himself.

In his mind there is no one in the world more important than he is, and that is the way he thinks he should be treated.

Everyone who deserves happiness will get it.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

 

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2017 7:09 pm Title: All That Remains

Ethan is so pathetic. He deserves to never be free again. Very good chapter. Thank you.



Author's Response:

 

SandyGale,

Ethan will never be out of prison since all four life terms will have to be served separately.

He's gone forever.

~charming1 and Lorie~

 

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