Date: Oct 05, 2017 7:09 pm Title: All That Remains
Ethan is so pathetic. He deserves to never be free again. Very good chapter. Thank you.
Author's Response:
SandyGale,
Ethan will never be out of prison since all four life terms will have to be served separately.
He's gone forever.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Oct 04, 2017 3:27 am Title: Final Curtain
No you got me.
Author's Response:
Wellreadbunny,
We were trying to keep everyone guessing on who the murderer was.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:27 pm Title: Final Curtain
Thank God Tim got away. I hope Ethan will suffer for his crimes.
Author's Response:
SandyGale,
Ethan will get what he deserves.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Oct 03, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Final Curtain
What a stupid man. Insyead of moving on with his life he let his bitterness get the better of him. Is that a tear I'm shedding? Nope just cutting onions.
Good thing Molly bought him to Brian and Justin so they could get him set up at the shelter. But like any kid he doesn't listen when told not to go off by himself. He was lucky.
Author's Response:
Sophiesmom,
Some people just let the bitterness consume them.
He was very lucky, and thanks to him the murderer was caught.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 8:12 pm Title: Final Curtain
Oh my. That was a surprise. I was so sure that it was Michael. But Ethan is a good choice. Glad Tim got away, because Molly would have killed someone if he hadn't.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
If it was Michael, he would have been caught the first time because he likes to brag.
Molly would gladly go after Ethan for what he did do to Tim.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Oct 03, 2017 7:42 pm Title: Final Curtain
GOOD for that damn chin-rat!! And none of the evidence is circumstantial; not one piece of it can be explained away leaving reasonable doubt! Oh I am so excited, even though I feel bad for Tim having to be in close proximity to that piece of vermin. I wish they would leave Brian in the room with that heap of cow dung for five minutes so he could deliver the ass whipping that has been a long time coming.
Now that that's over, in a sense at any rate, is there any way possible that Michael can be accidentally-on-purpose pushed down a manhole? His comments last chapter were just atrocious! At the very least, he should either have his vocal cords ripped out or end up gumming his food for the rest of his life. Ignorant troll!
Great job kicking up the angst and suspense factor in this chapter! I won't deny being tempted to scroll down to the end to see who/what was revealed. But I remained strong and am so HAPPY that I did!
Looking forward to MORE! Happy writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Chelle,
The weasel loses more in the next chapter.
He couldn't be the murderer, this is a prequel to BP and he shows up, however briefly.
More soon. <3
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Oct 03, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Final Curtain
Yeah, I guessed it could be Ian! What do we win if we guessed?
I hope it's not the end soon.
Author's Response:
Sno,
Check the chapter dedication.
Only a few more chapters.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2017 12:36 am Title: In the Presence of the Enemy
Things are looking up. I see there were pictures. Is there one of a certain dark haired man? Justin finding a boy that could have been Brian was sad. But at least one homeless boy won't be homeless anymore. Love how KiKi had Michael tossed out.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
No one really noticed details of the man because he is very forgettable.
The dark haired man has gotten very careless and will soon be even moreso.
Sam willnow be happy with people who know how to care for people based on who they are not who they love.
Kiki refuses to put up with the weasal's bullying.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Oct 01, 2017 11:50 pm Title: In the Presence of the Enemy
Uh. My bet is still on Ethan as the murderer. How could no one see what happened with so many people including the police around?
Poor Justin to think that was Brian. Those two should go away until the killer is caught although realilisticly they can't.
Nice of the Clarkes help Sam by taking him in. Hope it works out for all of them.
Author's Response:
Sophiesmom,
He is getting careless, to do it with so many people around was stupid.
They are too busy to be able to get away, but they will stick close together.
They will take care of Sam, it will help them heal.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Oct 01, 2017 8:45 pm Title: In the Presence of the Enemy
Pat and Sandy are angels. So beautiful. I hope they will be able to help Sam.
Ugh, Michael is the one who needs to shut up. I really, really want to punch him. Would that be okay for you?
Poor Justin... he thought the dead boy was Brian. It must have been a shock for him. He and Brian need to be safe.
Author's Response:
SandyGale,
They will do for Sam what they didn't get to do for Aaron.
If Michael got hit as many times as he deserved, there would be nothing left of him to write about.
It certainly helps him realize how Brian felt seeing the body behind Babylon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Oct 01, 2017 7:09 pm Title: In the Presence of the Enemy
Michael is getting more and more bitter and mean. I don't think he is the murderer, even if he thinks all that happened to him was Brian and Justin's fault.
Maybe Ethan? But, he wouldn't want to hurt his hands.
Author's Response:
Sno,
Michael is just a nasty, bitter, selfish prick.
The murderer will screw up soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 30, 2017 10:37 pm Title: The Likeness
Once Justin showed up I immediately thought of the hustler Brian hired when Justin was with the fiddler. I feel bad for the Clarkes.
It can't be Reikert because he killed himself after all the information about Jason came to ne.
Yeah the both need to get out of the city for a while. I'm surprised Brian isn't having nightmares after seeing the body.
Such a good chapter.
Author's Response:
Sophiesmom,
Brian and Justin are there for each other, always.
Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 30, 2017 10:22 pm Title: Nemesis
Michael and Ethan, let them commiserate together. What a pair they'd make.
Michael ruins his life and wants what doesn't belong to him. Somethings never change.
Justin! Found by the dumpster at Babylon? No! Just no! It's someone that looks like him. Either it has to be or if it's really justin then he isn't dead. And if it is, my bet is on that fucking fiddler.
Author's Response:
Sophiesmom,
If those two were ever together in anything we wrote they would be celibate. Wouldn't want to have to poke our eyes out.
Michael never thinks anything he does should get him into trouble.
I'm sure there is a question in there, but it's not one I can answer right now.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 29, 2017 8:40 pm Title: The Likeness
Thank you
Author's Response:
Sallyo,
You're welcome.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 29, 2017 6:21 pm Title: The Likeness
The mother's name is Sandy... are you trying to make me cry? I love how accepting you made Aaron's parents. But it will be hard for them to understand how their beloved son was killed so brutally.
Brian is so worried and he has every right to be. I love protective Brian, his true feelings are so open and clear to see for everyone. Hopefully the nightmare will end soon.
Author's Response:
SandyGale,
Happy you like the name we chose for Aaron's mom. We usually pick names of people
we like for our stories.
They will have help to get through their grief.
Open and protective Brian is always sexy.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 29, 2017 6:19 pm Title: Nemesis
Michael is such a useless idiot. I can't understand how he thinks it's okay to treat his mother like that.
I'm pretty sure you would NOT DARE to kill our lovely Justin off so I guess it's someone who looks a lot like him.
Michael would be an obvious guess but I can't see someone as stupid as him doing this. Maybe Ethan or Brandon... They would have reason to go after Brian and Justin but then we have Craig (who already tried to hurt Brian in canon) but also Rickert or Stockwell. I'm looking forward to read more :)
Author's Response:
SandyGale,
Michael is a selfish, spoiled brat, and feels he is owed just for being her child.
You will have an answer soon.
The murderer will screw up and be caught.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 29, 2017 5:38 pm Title: The Likeness
Excellent chapter! So heartbreaking and yet relief flooded me at it not being Justin. I find myself tempted to read BP again just to find out who the hell is missing from the storyline there but I know it won't help, except in reference to one idiot LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Chelle,
Glad you're enjoying the story.
You could definitely read BP again, but it may not help answer the question.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~ <3
Date: Sep 29, 2017 4:07 pm Title: The Likeness
The tension is getting high! Let's hope there won't be a next one that looks like Brian, otherwise they will freak out. Still no clue about the killer?
Author's Response:
Sno,
They may be more murders.
The killer is a male. (We're just mean)
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 3:45 pm Title: The Likeness
It's so sad. At least Aaron was loved, not like the others. Damn that Mikey.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
Arron's parents will have people to help them through their grief.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 2:49 pm Title: The Likeness
Oh my..such a romantic and hot chapter...loved it.
Thank u for the update.
Author's Response:
Navneet,
Their love for each other is very special and pure.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 2:36 pm Title: Nemesis
Omg...ethan and mikey...two pathetic losers...omfg..they are up to no good...i can only guess they are the only ones involved in the killings.
Author's Response:
Navneet,
Neither one of them is a good person in this story.
One is worse than the other.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 28, 2017 4:08 am Title: Nemesis
Oh no!!!!! What a cliffhanger! It can't be Justin, it must be someone looking like him; the hustler Brian got during Ethan's period, for example.
Author's Response:
Sno,
There will be more soon, we promise.
Everything will be explained.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2017 2:55 am Title: Nemesis
Oh no. You can't leave us with "Holy fuck, it's Justin!" I have to say the rest of the story was great. Debbie realizing that Michael isn't the loving child she thought she gave birth to.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
Unfortunately many parents come to the realization that the child they raised used their free will to become something that the parent never anticipated.
More soon, the story isn't over.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 28, 2017 1:47 am Title: Nemesis
OK now we have two suspects. Have you read The Sunshine Files? They opened a shelter and had job study. I think this is a great idea. Good luck.
Author's Response:
Wellreadbunny.
No, I (Lorie) have never read The Sunshine Files.
Hope you are enjoying our story.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 28, 2017 12:02 am Title: Nemesis
Cliffhanger!!! Yikes!
Author's Response:
Chadmom,
More in a couple of days.
~charming1 and Lorie~