Date: Sep 27, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Nemesis
Well, I just don’t like that cliff hanger 😣. I’m loving this story. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
DidiPita,
Glad you're enjoying the story.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 27, 2017 9:40 pm Title: Nemesis
Ahhhh. What a way to end, but I love this story. Love a good & evil Mikey.
Author's Response:
Sallyo,
Michael is being his normal nasty self.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 27, 2017 12:48 am Title: Postmortem
Genius! After Vic's house, this one will help another part of the gay community. Carl is the man of the situation. Great name!
It's very spooky that both dead hustlers looked like Brian and Justin! Glad that they don't know it.
Author's Response:
Sno,
It's always good to help people if you can.
They do know, because of Debbie, but once could just be a coincidence.
However...
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 26, 2017 8:05 pm Title: In Cold Blood
Fantastic beginning: hatred, murder, Debbie with her detective's hat, Ted in full protection mode...
So happy to see a new part to this series: thank you!
Author's Response:
Sno.
Thanks.
We hope you enjoy this story.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 26, 2017 2:25 am Title: Postmortem
Such a needed service- too bad there are not more people like Carl
Author's Response:
Sfscarlet,
Carl wants to help and knows where to go to get the help.
It would be great if this was a real thing. Not many people have the resources to do something like this.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 25, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Postmortem
Hey y'all, I may not be able to review all the time but rest assured I am reading this. I'm already in love with the mystery element of it. I would automatically say that the killer is the Moronic Moocher but I'm voting entirely for someone else. Michael is too lazy and intellectually-challenged to pull something like that off, especially if staying true to the BP universe.
So by deduction, I know it has to be someone with a HUGE axe to grind, who was most likely either rejected by the duo- individually or collectively, OR it's someone with a knowledge of law enforcement, who knows how to keep evidence from being found. That said, I'm voting for four people: Kip, Ethan, Sapperstein and Stockwell. The first three were rejected by Brian and Justin; the latter knows how to keep his proverbial nose clean and mislead cops in the process (look what happened with Kenneth Reichert). I could also see Brandon entering this fray BUT, he's much too arrogant to do something like this. He's one who needs to be wanted so it kinda goes against the idea of him even thinking he should pay for ass.
Anyway, I look forward to see where you two will take this! Hopefully the "Sunshine and Rainbows" Foundation will thwart any more murders, but also expose the killer(s) of Kyle and Frankie. Poor boys!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Hey Chelle,
It definitely is one of the people you mentioned.
The foundation will help a lot of kids, in many ways.
The murderer isn't finished yet.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 25, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Postmortem
I hope this works.
Author's Response:
Sophiesmom,
Brian and Justin don't have bad ideas.
It will be great.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 25, 2017 7:45 pm Title: In Cold Blood
So someone has something against Brian and Justin enough to go around killing twinks that look like them. I would say Michael since he has issues with both of them, but that would be way too easy.
Ted really should let brian know about Michael's phone call. Especially if he wants to stay Brian's friend. Best or not.
Author's Response:
Sophiesmom,
Jealousy and revenge are great motivations.
Ted has no reason to keep anything from Brian, even if the exchange between them isn't written in the story, Brian would have been told.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Postmortem
Love this idea. If only it were used in real life. I notice this is anti-Ethan and I'm guessing we know who did away with the Brian look-a-like.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
It would be great if people could really be like that for the thrown away kids.
It's anti-Ethan and anti-Michael.
There may be only one murderer. But they could have something against both men.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 25, 2017 2:46 pm Title: Postmortem
I love Carl's idea and it's great that Brian and Justin didn't even hesitate. With all of them working together, they will make Sunshine and Rainbows not only a success but also a great place for all those homeless souls. Hopefully every single one will get the chance to make something out of their lives.
Author's Response:
SandyGale,
They are all caring people and want everyone to be safe and accepted.
There will be more help coming to the residents.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Postmortem
Banner is simply marvelous.
Author's Response:
Navneet,
Wendy Dawn did make a perfect banner for our story.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2017 1:56 pm Title: Postmortem
Awesome chapter.... They all are doing soo kind work..loving it...thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Navneet,
Thanks.
They are great people and really want to help.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 25, 2017 12:57 pm Title: Postmortem
I have a few ideas who is behind the murders, but I'll keep quiet. Great start. My only critique: Could you put a space between paragraphs. It would make it easier to read. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Bluecat,
The murderer will be caught.
Glad you're enjoying the story.
The problem with the spacing between paragraphs seems to only be happening if you are using the 'Cabaret' skin. If you change to another skin there is spacing between the paragraphs. We are working on fixing the problem.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 24, 2017 11:38 am Title: In Cold Blood
Interesting start. Michael is such a nasty creature and Ted ripping him a new a** was great, very well written. Looking forward to read more.
PS: I need to read 'Bittersweet Promise'. It sounds familiar but I'm not sure I ever read it. Will do that now for sure.
Author's Response:
SandyGale,
Glad you like the start of this story.
Michael is definitely nasty and it's nice to see him put in his place.
More soon.
Bittersweet Promise is a great story, I hope you enjoy it.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2017 3:26 am Title: In Cold Blood
Alright you've got me hooked. Looking forward to the next chapters and it looks like Micheal is still a weaselly POS.
Author's Response:
Lorna,
Happy you're hooked.
Of course Michael is a weasel. To him, he's the only one that matters.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 23, 2017 7:24 pm Title: In Cold Blood
Wow! Michael still sucks. I hate him, but hope he is not the murderer.
Author's Response:
Wellreadbunny,
Michael always sucks.
Someone murdered those boys.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 23, 2017 5:09 pm Title: In Cold Blood
Great Story, I love how you wrote this so far and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying our new story.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 4:18 pm Title: In Cold Blood
Omg...that is one freaking awesome plot...love the Mystery ...hmm both the hustlers resembles like BJ ..was the killer someone who hates BJ or Loves BJ way too much??? Soo exciting start..thank u for posting...looking forward for more.
P.S - Love the banner..great work by miss.wendy dawn.
Author's Response:
Navneet,
So glad you like the plot and the start of this story.
It's likely that the killer knows them both.
Wendy Dawn did do an awesome job on the story banner.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 3:21 pm Title: In Cold Blood
Wow, this is looking to be interesting. I'm making a wild guess and it's looking like Michael has gone from bad to worse. I love the way you've written Carl and Deb, it's so them. Will Ted tell Brian what Michael asked him to do?
Author's Response:
YumYum,
This definitely is an interesting story, it will keep you guessing.
Weasels don't change.
Deb is very passionate about her 'boys', and Carl is passionate about Deb.
Ted has no reason to keep secrets from Brian, he's not trying to screw him over.
~charming1 and Lorie~