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Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2020 10:49 am Title: On Display

Personally I think you have their voices spot on lol

Reviewer: Nanna Nat Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2020 6:07 am Title: On Display

A fun addition. I love thinking about the Justin and Brian dynamic with the kids as teens. 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 12:42 pm Title: On Display

good one

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 7:32 pm Title: On Display

You have already found their voices. 😉 sweet, loving and very sexy. 

Having Emmet the unwilling audience was a delicious addition. It made the whole thing hotter. 

Love this ficlet. And if this is your first QAF story, well.. I can’t wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I will admit that I was nervous at first, (as anyone is posting in a new fandom), but the fandom has been very supportive as I tested my new wings and I've had a lot of fun with this couple. And poor Em...didn't want to interrupt, but so not wanting to be there at that moment in time; and then again, so wanting to watch because who wouldn't it? Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 2:00 pm Title: On Display

I think you have found their voices pretty good: Brian and Justin are so in character, as is Emmett and then Jennifer, who learned how to help her sons while they needed some quality time.

Who was talking about Justin's paintings? I hope not his father or the art critic who "sent" him to NY.

Great story!



Author's Response:

I honestly don't know who was talking about the paintings; but I do know it was complimentary and that, at the very least, leaves out Craig. I'm guessing some admirer. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2018 8:56 am Title: On Display

Very hot. And very sweet of Brian, too! TAG



Author's Response:

Brian does have his sweet moments. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 4:54 am Title: On Display

So hot and they have kids....

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.! :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2017 3:18 am Title: On Display

Welcome to KD, it's awesome to have you here. I love how this was such a great mixture of cute, HOT, and a great little plot bunny thrown in. I love stuff about Justin not recovering 100% since the bashing and I do think his social anxiety still did linger whenever things got tough. I hope we get more from you x



Author's Response:

Being someone with an anxiety disorder, I can tell you that it never fully goes away. You learn to recognize the triggers and you learn ways to cope with it, but it's always there. Which is why I was always disappointed that the writers never fully addressed it again. I guess you can say that it came out during the Pink Posse arc, but that was more anger than anxiety. Anyways, glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2017 11:14 pm Title: On Display

Quite a way to releave Justins stress LOL

Author's Response:

I'd be very open to Brian relieving my stress in the same way; sadly, he's gay. Justin has all the luck. :)

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2017 12:15 pm Title: On Display

This is Brian and justin even with kids ! Good story ! Thank you



Author's Response:

I've always enjoyed stories where Brian and Justin are parents. I think they'd do an amazing job. Thanks!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2017 10:42 am Title: On Display

Loved this!  That was so hot.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2017 12:53 am Title: On Display

 

Ashita,

Welcome to Kinnetik Dreams..

The story was great, and very Brian and Justin.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the warm welcome! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2017 11:49 pm Title: On Display

We learn a lot.  We learn that they have two more kids besides Gus and that Jennifer is a life saver.  



Author's Response:

What would this world be like without mothers to bail us out when were stuck in a tight spot? Thanks for the comments!

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2017 8:11 pm Title: On Display

You have their voices down pretty well.

Welcome to the QAF fandom!!

 

Sandy



Author's Response:

Oh, I am glad that their voices came across since inaccurate characterization is one of my pet peeves and I always feel a bit insecure jumping into a new fandom no matter how many years I've been writing fanfiction. Thanks for the warm welcome and comments! :)

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2017 7:50 pm Title: On Display

Welcome to Kinnetik Dreams. Such a good story. Thanks for posting it here. TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks for the warm welcome and I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :)

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