Date: Apr 12, 2018 11:13 am Title: Chapter 4
Bree learned a very important lesson. Brian and Justin are really great parents.
Author's Response: Glad you think so.
Date: Nov 22, 2017 12:25 am Title: Chapter 4
Boy that could have gone so many ways. It's good that Bree shares. Even better that Gus got to record the play. He's the hero of the day. I love these Holiday stories.
Author's Response: Thanks, they're always fun to write.
Date: Oct 14, 2017 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Now Winona and her mother are starting to barge in Brian's personal space.
A little tension between Gus and Bree for a simple adjective: he should be careful as she is so attentive to what he does/says. Justin found a way to make Gus' point more obvious.
Brian is very considerate with Ted, but Ted is not very perceptive: I loved the way Brian had to go from Ted to Schmidt (and Teddy in the middle) when Ted didn't realize what Brian was trying to tell him.
Author's Response: Winona and her mother are certainly a pair.
Date: Oct 14, 2017 1:03 am Title: Chapter 4
OK lesson learned Bree shares
Author's Response: Yes she does.