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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2020 6:56 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

What if Lindsay's parents were willing to give her  some money but she had to sign a contract that says that she had to payback every cent they have given her since she left college and she had to sign it quickly before the cameras start rolling so she doesn't get to read it?

Maybe Lindsay also signs that since she can't interfere with Brian, Justin and Miranda that she has to payback every cent Brian ever lent her going back to before Gus was born and so does Michael?

And that since Michael went to Kinnetik he gets fined $150 and each time he violates order it keeps going up.

Plus maybe Ron and Nancy talk to Brian, Justin and Mel which helps them decide to join in paying back Lindsay for her embarrassing actions while also being happy away from her and Lynette is in charge of making sure every cent is paid back with interest.

Just the thought of Michael taking off his clothes is Disgusting and yet just think of all the pleasure Lindsay will have being so up close and personal with Michael.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 4:11 am Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

Looking forward to another chapter. Great writing.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2019 12:59 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

Great writing!Looking fo ad to the smack down!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2019 3:08 am Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

Absolutely wonderful.  I caught up and read all the chapters.  Now I am ready for more. LOL  Love the story is going.  And, you know I love when Mikey and Linds are idiots and you write that so well.  Great job.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2019 7:37 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

Well, if in just a few days, Michael has already spent over $5k, and then with the $750 he just doled out, how long is $4k gonna last him? Is every competition going to cost money? Buh-bye money! What will Lindsay do after Michael's money is gone?At least Michael is entertaining the idea of getting a job.

It's going to be kind of hard for them to bring Rita Montgomery in, as she's DEAD!!! And I don't think a rotting corpse will do them any good.

What in hell does Craig Taylor want? If it's a loan, or any financial help at all, he can kiss that thought away while he's filing Chapter 7. Maybe if he had paid Justin's tuition at the time he asked, Justin might have even allowed him to ask, but he certainly isn't now. Way too much crap between them for Justin to give him the time of day.

Good to see an update of this story,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2019 1:11 am Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

Michael only has five thousand left? lol

He will be broke in a few days and then what they do?

Why does Craig suddenly want to talk to Justin?

Justin owns The Bloom Gallery? 

Lindsay does realize those papers she signed are legally binding and there is no cooling off period for her to change her mind later.

Though I think she will be in the most pain because she will have to draw on Michael who will be semi-naked for hours rofl

Yeah that time limit is going to chafe Lindsay's ass especially with Michael whining and complaining for the cameras to record forever

Lindsay's mask of serenity will slip at some point and then her true vulture face will be seen by everyone.

If Michael is a hyena then Lindsay is a crocodile with tears to match when she can't get her way.

Yes do bring in Rita Montgomery it is time Hunter put her in her place too cause she needs to be expunged from Hunter's life just like Michael.

Lindsay may have her foot in the door but she won't be staying long Justin has already surpassed her mediocre expectations and Brian has already found his Happiness so why would he settle for tuna when he has filet mignon waiting at home?

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 11:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

Wouldn't it be wonderful if Mysterious Marilyn could tell Michael and Lindsay just how badly their plan is going to work.



Author's Response:

HA! Now there's an idea, Phyllis! I just may have to use that. Thanks, Darling!

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 10:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

thanks for update

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 7:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

Yes, Do Deck him, Deck him, Deck him Lindsay! Its so great read Lindsay Mad. Foaming & fuming. *inner Emmett clapping .

Proud of Hunter & Daphne. Seriously Who needs enemy, if one have friends like Micheal & Lindsay *cunt-dick in cohoots.

Lovely update. Enjoyed it. Hugs ❤

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 3:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 15: THE ORIGINAL DEFINITION OF C.U.N.T. MEETS THE NEW ONE: Take ONE

Lindsay's dream is slowly turning into a nightmare and when Michael will realize how much she used him, he won't let her go easily.

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