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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2021 6:24 am Title: CHAPTER 17: TOE PICK

I read the first story and am now all caught up on this one, which I am totally loving, by the way. I very much hope that you continue with this one; I'd love to see how everything moves along and Lindsay and Michael get their much-awaited comeuppance!!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2021 5:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 17: TOE PICK

reading it again and hoping for an update

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2020 9:09 pm Title: CHAPTER 17: TOE PICK

Ha ha ha, Craig! You are killing me with this surprise!

Michael really doesn't understand how Brian's sexuality works and what he needs/likes.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2020 7:55 am Title: CHAPTER 17: TOE PICK

Lindsay and Michael are going to be so disillusioned. I hope Michael will find a way to get into the building I would like to see him do the model for Lindsay he will moan so much!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2020 1:40 am Title: CHAPTER 17: TOE PICK

I first have to say, I LOVED Cutting Edge... I don't have enough fingers and toes to count how many times I have seen that movie... and now thanks to you, I'll probably have to rewatch it (it's been a while)... I can still hear her sing-songy voice "toe pick"... as he falls flat on his - keister. (I did not like the sequel though.)

Do you realize I had to stop reading and bleach my brain of the images Michael was putting in my head?! You really should be ashamed of yourself... Even now, when I close my eyes, I'm seeing those HORRID images. If I have nightmares tonight... you, my dear, might get a nasty message.

Then, we went on to Miss Delusional, Lindsay... Christ what a woman! HER HUSBAND?? I loved the 'tuna' reference to her though. When is that woman going to learn?? She is continually put in her place, yet she fails to learn. At least she was good for a few chuckles... her thinking she will beat Justin in the competion... is absolutely hilarious! But the fact that all of them, even Brian, was looking at her and laughing... how can she STILL think Brian wants anything to do with her? And she doesn't even have Gus anymore to use as a bargaining chip... yep... delusional...

And Michael's 'Superman' wallet, is about to have cash depleted... AGAIN!! I'm really hoping he doesn't manage to get back into the building. But, if word has gotten around about the lack of Lindsay's expertise to the models, will she even be able to pay one of them enough to sit for her?

And, OMG! Craig Taylor! Michael should just go interrupt 'daddy' and ask if he has a key card he could use... AND... Just how old is this artist he's engaging in 'hide the salami' with?

Thanks for this whole brain bleach chapter. I bet you were laughing the whole time you were writing this!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 6:23 pm Title: CHAPTER 17: TOE PICK

Cheryl can afford to dress anyway she wants she has Class which Lindsay could never achieve on her best day which she won't be having anytime soon.

I so wanted Cheryl to hit her but Lindsay would've died with glee so instead helping Justin shine on every competition would be better and funner.

Lindsay like Michael couldn't beat Justin if he was Dead dumb and blind which thankfully he is not and never will be, Lindsay has as much talent as she does brains so this first competition should be fun.

I do hope Michael will get back k in time cause Lindsay should enjoy the perfume wafting from Michael's body as he models for her and his dulcet tones will be so soothing to ears for hours.

Lindsay and Michael really do share the same brain to bad the hamster left for greener pastures and the pea is actually a shriveled dried up raisin lol

Craig with one of the male contestants moaning in the garage?

WTF???!!!!

Michael should've stuck around maybe he can get some pointers on how to please a man heaven knows he and Lindsay could use them because they can't please anyone especially Brian Aiden Kinney.

Brian wouldn't sleep with Michael if he shot gold bricks out of his Ass!

And never sleep with Lindsay again if her snatch was the way to Narnia!

Brian got Paradise in his Sunshine!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 6:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 17: TOE PICK

Shame Lindsay thinks she's important to anyone.  Michael seems to be in the same boat.  How does he manage to get back into the building.  How stupid to leave his phone and wallet where Lindsay has access to them.

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