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Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2018 8:05 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 1

i have to say, i was flying hiiiiiiiiiigh and then, no more "next" button for me!!! truly one of the best thing i have ever read and as a true "Anti Michael" I can't be any happier! hope you will continue it

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2018 3:22 am Title: CHAPTER 6: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 1

I must say that I love your writing and so agree with the way you write Michael and LIndsay- no love lost there.  Michael is so hell bent on getting Justin out of the picture that he has forgotten to really look at the picture and Linds- well all she wants is Justin to go back to New York and she can't see that this is not in the cards either.  So glad for the update, but I must say I love all your stories.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2018 6:30 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 1

When A Self-absorbed Prince and a Self-absorbed Princess get together Stupidity Reigns Supreme and laughter ensues.

Michael should really gut use to the gutter got a feeling he just might be permanently camped there for the rest of his pathetic life.

Justin should see Lindsay joining the competition as not a way she can annoy him further, but as way he can sabotage her before she can really sabotage him.

Lindsay is an entitled princess who thinks rules don't apply to her when she wants to win, so by smiling and doing Wasp insults while looking innocent and abiding by the rules of the competition Justin will outshine her meager attempts, while also looking for suitable artists to work with and for him.

Lindsay hates being ignored and shown up so turning her game around on her in front of the cameras Justin looks like a consummate professional, while  Lindsay and Stacey (We Know  They Will Join Forces)look like amateur idiots with mediocre talent :) (Plus I wouldn't put it pass Lindsay to argue with the judges lol)

Ben is free to find someone who wants just him and to live his life without the screechy whining, I know his ears must be thankful about that? <giggles>

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2018 3:53 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 1

I love how you manage Ben and Michael: finally is getting rid of the dead weight.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2018 1:24 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 1

Wonderful chapter. Michael and Lindsay, two peas in a pod. They can do no right.

Betcha Ben did a little happy dance on the way to the car. Let Michael try and get his keys and phone back. Malcolm can call the cops on his breaking and entering. Well at least he'd have a place to sleep that night. Sure as hell won't be at Deb's and definitely not the loft.

He doesn't seem to upset about the loss of the comic book store. What deal are Brian and Justin going to make with him? If it doesn't include moving out of the city or even out of state, it won't be worth it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2018 3:45 am Title: CHAPTER 6: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 1

Love how Justin has everything all fixed up.  Can't get over how Michael and Lindsay don't seem to realize they've screwed themselves up.

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