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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 5

Wow, just wow. I never expected that. 



Author's Response:

Well I have to spice it up a bit.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 5

The MM twist was fantastic and only Brian is preggers? I hoped for both lol



Author's Response:

Well the story isn't over yet.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Excellent: Brian is pregnant and Justin is sick.

Will they leave the firehouse? I thought it was big enough for a big family, which they are getting.

Poor Ben: he really isn't good at picking a good partner. At least, he isn't sick anymore.



Author's Response:

I think the firehouse was tainted by Deb and Michael's interference so moving is a viable option.  About Ben if it weren't for bad luck he'd have no luck at all on picking partners.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:13 am Title: Chapter 5

Love that Marty knows what Marilyn knows but not the other way around. Creates a very interesting dynamic between the two personalities. 

So Brian is pregnant but Justin is suffering the morning sickness? SWEET! I can't begin to tell you how many times I wished someone else had the damn ANYTIME sickness when I had my two....LOL

So Ben married a married man with 6.5 kids....SMH I honestly don't know if he went from bad to worse where Michael is concerned. Now THAT says an awful lot!

Onto the next chapter!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

I wanted something different and a reason why Mysterious Marilyn denied sending the cards.  Unfortunatly once I get thinking on a plot line anything can happen.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:42 am Title: Chapter 5

Nope..i was clueless...there...brian prego...cool.



Author's Response:

Tricked you, did I?  Bet you thought Justin was.  And the story isn't over yet!

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

So Ben can pick them (not) but I can see that the couple may be able to get Justin well.

 

Is Justin having the morning sickness for Brian? I feel for him.(have all day sickness for both of my 2 children)

Sandy



Author's Response:

I feel your pain!  Yep, Brian's the one with child and Justin's suffering from it.

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Would you indicate it’s mpreg so folks don’t start reading if it’s not their thing?



Author's Response:

I though I had.  Let me check.

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