Date: Dec 30, 2022 5:58 am Title: Chapter 8
This was a great ending to the story!! I am glad that Justin got his sight back and am happy that Gus and JR got their lives back as well, living with Brian and Justin.
Date: Aug 13, 2019 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
good one
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:57 am Title: Chapter 8
This story is so far out there but not everything has to be serious all the time. I enjoyed it a lot.
Author's Response:
I'm glad. It's hard to write something that hasn't been done, so I hope I managed it. I appreciate all the comments.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 8
Loved this...
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I hope the ending was all you hoped for.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, the end is spooky!
Author's Response:
Well it is Halloween.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 4:04 am Title: Chapter 8
LMAO!!! I can't say that I blame Dummy for clawing out his own eyes with the images of the last scene. I'm still laughing hard at that!
So glad that they have all moved on beyond Manic Michael and Loony Lindsay. Hopefully they will have a life full of love and laughter, but most of all Novotny free!
Great Job Phyllis!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I thought, what could be the worse thing for Michael and ran with it. Living in a home with it's own playground and such an assortment of playmates for Becca and Gus will insure lots of laughter. Now that there are five kids to love it's a sure thing.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Omg...ew ew ew he scratched out his own eyes? Jesus! What were Justin & Brian's babies & their names? Glad everyone was happy in the end but are they realing living in an old church? Hahaha
Author's Response:
Considering what he was seeing can you blame him? As for the babies names, I hadn't given it much thought. Do you have any suggestions? Yes, it is a church, I think it was Presbyterian.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love the way you wrapped eveything up.
Great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's always nice to hear.
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's always nice to hear.