Date: Dec 15, 2017 7:40 pm Title: Mettle Testing and Going to the Hop...Part 1
The scenes with Jenny are delightful! The shaving is a great idea to clear her head!
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2017 3:28 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Yes, but why Baton Rouge. I only ask because I live there and want to know why he would be here.
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2017 1:53 pm Title: Mettle Testing and Going to the Hop...Part 1
Love Jenny's new do. Why is Ted in Baton Rouge? Did I miss the Hotrod and motorcycle rally? What is going on?
Author's Response:
Ted was at a business meeting. The rally and Hop are in the next chapter...lots of things are going on...
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 15, 2017 12:42 pm Title: Mettle Testing and Going to the Hop...Part 1
Terrific chapter. I just love this story more and more as it gets better and better. Your imagination is perfect.
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2017 5:38 am Title: Mettle Testing and Going to the Hop...Part 1
Michael needs to get use to that feeling of being alone eating dust while everyone else is passing him by.
Brian and Justin may never be able to look Ted in the eyes again lol
Lindsay and Mel are finding their happiness and camaraderie now that Jenny isn't around to play then against each other.
Emmett outdid himself again to make Brian and Justin happy and take the pressure off Jennifer who is introducing everyone to her new man.
Jenny is realizing that Military School Ain't No Joke!
Love when the drill sergeant smashed her Precious Tablet I bet it made such a lovely sound each time he smashed the screen rofl.
The shaving of her head was a nice touch and saves her neck since she has nothing to flick anymore...At least hair wise ;)
So what will the little baby try next and what will Michael do when Ted and Reed come back?
Date: Dec 13, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Starting to Square the Circle
The trap is seriously closing around Michael.
Justin's is going to have very busy months until the baby is there and Brian will take every opportunity to help him on every level.
Date: Dec 13, 2017 6:51 am Title: Starting to Square the Circle
More please. I love to see Michael in trouble.
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2017 2:32 am Title: Starting to Square the Circle
Oh my. This is so good. Lindsay sending Jenny off and Michael getting tricked into thinking that Nya's dad has the note he gave Ted. Hahaha. Michael thought he had everything under control. Wrong.
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2017 12:40 am Title: Starting to Square the Circle
Lindsay Really Is Changing!!!
I was like Mel I wanted to cry too when Lindsay said Jenny wasn't going to military school at the end of summer and got to sprouting that "Peterson Women Stick Together" crap.
But Lindsay saved the day and Mel (Plus Everyone Else) from actually killing that brat by sending her early. (loved Mel knocking Jenny down another peg)
Considering Jenny's behavior as she was being dragged out of the house it is not going to be a good week for the little dear <evil grin>
Michael is sinking quicker in the sand pit he trapped himself in.
Nya and her dad came up with a good idea to get Michael to confess to his many sins.
I was still kinda hoping Jenny went to live with Michael, those two brats really deserve each other and Michael would be crying uncle in fifteen minutes.
Author's Response:
You genius! You have just pushed along the plot...was wondering how to get to that!
Happy reading...exits stage left happy dancing.
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 13, 2017 12:31 am Title: Starting to Square the Circle
Thanks for getting a new chapter out so quickly. Really love this story and I love the chapter titles. Great ideas.
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2017 12:07 am Title: When the Going Gets Tough the Tough Get...Stupid
I feel for Kemi because she is tired of dealing with Jenny and Michael and I think she could chew glass after the way Michael talked to her.
Michael as usual trying to be clever is tightening the noose around his own neck.
Date: Dec 12, 2017 7:48 pm Title: When the Going Gets Tough the Tough Get...Stupid
I have to start off by commenting on just how bloody stupid Michael is. Gotta love it. Just wait till he finds out that he's been screwed over (a lot) and that Jenny really isn't his after all. what will he do then? Will he see her for the heinous bitch she really is?
Jenny Jenny Jenny. What can one say about her. I referred to her as a heinous bitch. Well it's appropriate. that fact that she just keep continuing on with the behaviour just show's what kind of dellusions she's living under. You'd think she'd at least try to behave, but no... At least it makes it fun for us to read about!! lol.
Lindsey really seems to have learned her lesson. I relly hope she sticks to it and that she doesn't fall back into bad behaviour. the fact that she takes responsibility fo rJenny's behaviour and attitude speaks volumes.
Another fantastic chapter!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2017 7:15 pm Title: When the Going Gets Tough the Tough Get...Stupid
I really like this new version of Lindsey: she even acknowledges the way she did wrong with Jenny.
Date: Dec 12, 2017 2:50 pm Title: When the Going Gets Tough the Tough Get...Stupid
Just when you think Michael can't get any dumber, he proves us wrong. Love what an idiot you have made him into.
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:56 am Title: When the Going Gets Tough the Tough Get...Stupid
Michael is an idiot. Maybe Norbert can tune him up again , harder.
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2017 5:26 am Title: When the Going Gets Tough the Tough Get...Stupid
Looks like Michael is going to get his. Jenny shouldn't be allowed out in polite society.
Date: Dec 11, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Yuckamucking and Fist Bumping
What did Nya find after checking who Jenny's dad is? I hope it's not someone from the family.
Michael is starting to drown.
Author's Response:
No definitely not anyone they know. Drowning would be less painful than the hell that is coming his way...
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2017 1:27 pm Title: Yuckamucking and Fist Bumping
So Michael isn't Jenny's daddy, then why the talk with Nya's father? What have they planned for Michael? It looks like Ted's calling in his loan?
Date: Dec 11, 2017 10:56 am Title: Yuckamucking and Fist Bumping
Oh, Yay, more trouble for Michael. Just love when the writers make him out to be such an idiot. Great job.
Date: Dec 11, 2017 7:03 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Please please more Brian and Justin!))
Date: Dec 11, 2017 6:44 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
please never ever do those things to your kids. i know that these are fiction and i might be overreacting. but it was troubling for me to read.
but besides that, i really like the story. i'm a sucker for anti michael.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments, it was troubling for me to write, but in the context of the story it was done and will only be done the once.
Happy and Happier reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 11, 2017 6:13 am Title: Yuckamucking and Fist Bumping
Oh boy.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2017 5:26 am Title: Yuckamucking and Fist Bumping
Nya is brutal but once you learn a lesson from her you never act up again lol
Lindsay threatening Michael is worthy of a fist bump.
Michael has to scramble to pay Reed and pay his debt rofl
Earl seems like he would be a vicious debt collector to a low life who tries to get out of paying his debts.
Jenny will get way worser retaliation in military school and with her mouth she won't be able to sleep a wink. (Can Michael be enrolled in Military School? lol)
Her games won't work in military school they have their own set of rules and games for a pampered little brat.
So it has been confirmed that Michael is not Jenny's father and the donor sample was used.
So now Lindsay, Earl and Nya are going to work to destroy Michael and get him to leave town with no way of coming back.
Brian being so tender with Justin is so cute and relegating Michael to a chair is Hilarious.
Fantastic Update :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2017 12:19 am Title: Seriously...How Do You Think This Is Going For You?
That little bitch deserved that and so much more. It's about time.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2017 6:08 pm Title: Seriously...How Do You Think This Is Going For You?
OMGAWD I LOVE AUNT ABI!!!!
It was a longtime coming but Lindsay had to be the one to show Jenny that her behavior is not going to fly anymore.
Toothbrush with soap?!?! Genius!!!
That little brat has to learn and it is something Deb should try on Michael when he gets mouthy since hitting him on the back of the head isn't working.
OMG!!! Michael Revealed He Is Jenny's Dad!!!!!
Please let someone have caught what he said!! <fingers crossed>
Uncle Earl and Aunt Abi Are So Awesome and have Great Put downs :)
Uncle Earl talking to Lindsay is good she needs to fully understand the damage she caused by favoring Jenny over Gus and how much it cause him to doubt His Mother's love for him.
Lindsay has a lot to do to repair the pain she inflicted on Gus with her cruel behavior but they could be friends before they move to being a family again.
She also has to deal with the cruelty she inflicted on Jenny by spoiling her and giving in to her every whim (Hello Deb 2.0) and teaching her to use others to get what she wants (Wasp Training).
If Lindsay Really Is Changing then she needs to apologize to Brian for abusing his trust and friendship for years and for her jealousy and spite about him being pregnant?
This Just May Be My Favorite Chapter lol ;)