Date: Oct 24, 2017 6:15 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Great beginning! Another amazing story in preparation! Thank you!
Date: Oct 24, 2017 6:12 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Wow...Michael is more hateful then ever! I was also totally prepared to dislike Deb here, but I now understand what's happening. Wonder what it is that Michael said. something completely unforgivable.
Love that Brian is a dad here. Kemi is a spitfire isn't she?! I think I can already see Justin in her. lol Looking forward to when we are introduced the Justin's little one. (or not so little)
Great start!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Oct 24, 2017 4:05 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Oh my God! Could I hate Michael any more than I already do?! Yes! What a prick....Kemi is a little girl, I'm assuming lol Can't wait to hear some backstory on this one...omg so good! Thanks for hooking me right away Miss Merlot!
Author's Response:
You're welcome Glo! Nice to have you back! Back story in C2...
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 24, 2017 12:22 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
I see you love Michael to death just like me!!!
Nice start!!!!
Date: Oct 24, 2017 8:15 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Ok. this one is good.
Date: Oct 24, 2017 2:40 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
I'm excited for more!
Date: Oct 24, 2017 12:08 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Ooh. Mikey isn't going yo like what's coming. Can't wait.
Tedvis Kemi's godfather. Go Ted! Yay Brian!
Deb has a room at Brian's and still treats him like shit? Explain that one to me.
Author's Response:
She does but it is all, a facade because they are trying to find the man of Brian)s dreams....
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 11:40 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
I hate Michael, always have always will.
Keep it up
Date: Oct 23, 2017 11:30 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Yep Mickey is digging already. Not only on the foundation of a non existent friendship but his own grave as well. Keep going Mickey the sooner you are gone the better it is.
Ted being the godfather to Brians daughter. Sweet!!
XOXO
MeMa
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 10:56 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
I like this. This is different from what you normally would write. Can't wait for more.
Thanks for keeping the boys going.
Lots of love
~Teresa~
Author's Response:
I thought I would try my hand at fluffy, I do fluffy with angst but this will be pure fluff but anti-M. Hope you continue to enjoy.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 10:52 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Very interesting start. Question 1 - where is Justin? Liking that Ted and Emmett are backing Brian. Not so sure about Deb though it looks like she too is on Team Brian. Michael needs a reality check. More, more, more!
Author's Response:
Justin is coming in the next chapter but he doesn't meet Briann just yet...
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 23, 2017 10:47 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
This is off to a wonderful start!
Deb
Date: Oct 23, 2017 10:39 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Yay! You're back and plotting Michael's comeuppance!
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 10:37 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
So you Have Michael in the first chapter digging his own grave?
I LOVE IT!!!