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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 9:47 am Title: And He Greets

What is up Lindsay's ass? How can you treat your kids like that?

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2017 4:01 pm Title: And He Greets

Yay!! Public slapdown for Lindth!!

I so agree with Norm and Brian. To torment a child with a name like that. 

And Lindth's way of picking on the poor girl is despicable. Norm worded it all very well. Just because the stupid heffer was picked on by her mother doesn't give her permission to do the same to poor Effy.

Good on Molly to go after Effy and comfort her. I can see them becoming great friends and sisters in a sway.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO

MeMa

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2017 5:52 pm Title: And He Greets

Lindsay just had to show her crassness first by trying to embarrass Gus, then being condescending to Hunter, but the piece De resistance was her trying to Fat Sham Effy.

I doubt Lindsay is as thin as Olive Oil and no amount of salads will help that, so she should shut her flat Ass up and let Effy grow into her body and the woman she wants to be.

Besides Lindsay trying to imitate Nancy just ensures that she is going to get her Ass kicked a lot quicker.

Norm must have lost a bet when he married Lindsay??

I sincerely hope Effy does change her name Edna Fanny is terrible and what the Hell was Lindsay smoking when she came up with that?

Michael is Crazy if he thinks anyone on Liberty Avenue would help him? 

Moonshine and Hero are already great friends which paves a way for Brian and Justin to become friendlier :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2017 4:53 pm Title: And He Greets

Great chapter!

I thought you would have made Brian lose to Justin at the poker game, just to see how he would have reacted.

I love these quotes that involve Lindsay:

“Don’t say it like you have a dick in your mouth. Say it like you mean it...you know enunciate, Lindsay.”

“I was not giving her a complex. It was constructive criticism.” As if she was constructive, ever!

“If you’re going to argue semantics, you are being a bitch!” I snap back.


Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2017 4:47 pm Title: And He Greets

Love when Lindsay gets put in her place!

I love this story!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:32 pm Title: And He Greets

Oh thank goodness "Lindth" (hehe) is being brought to task on her behaviour. Norman is not the limp dicked wimp she seems to think he is. There is definitely mmore to him than meets the eye. They're discussion should proved to be very interesting if not very amusing.

So Hero and Mooshine have hit it off. Effy and Molly have as well. Brian and Justin too. I think that Brian is going to be extremely protective of Justin. 

Michael and Lindsey, are of course the idiots of the story. Again, all their intereactions should prove to be interesting. Will they work individually or team up?It's always fun to watch them crash and burn. ;)

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:04 pm Title: And He Greets

Love how Moonshine and Hero get along.  What is Michael up to thinking Liberty Ave will back him?  Love, love, love how Norman and Brian put Lindsay in her place.  Why did Norman marry her?  Is she his beard?  

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2017 5:39 am Title: And He Greets

That was great. They really gave it to Lindsay.

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