Date: Jan 06, 2018 10:03 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid
I'm laughing so hard at Michael right now. Great chapter.
Date: Dec 13, 2017 3:50 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid
Craig hit Justin growing up?
Brian is going to have a little chat with Mr. Taylor and Mrs. Taylor cause no way is she getting out of feeling the full wrath of one Brian Aiden Kinney!!
Dun, Dun, Dun, Dunnnnnn!!!!
Heathan and Stanley were smart to see the error of their ways, apologize and walk away from Michael for good. (May They Stay Smart:))
Author's Response:
Sorry to confuse dear one. It was Brian talking about the first time his dad hit him not Justin. As for Heathan and Stanley let's just say they get to meet Big Bad...who is very protective of the man he loves...dun dun duuuuunnnnnn!!!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 12, 2017 7:36 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid
I have to wonder about Catharine's sanity by getting herself involved with Lindsey. I mean really??? She has got to know what she's really like. Ah well....live and learn as they say.
I always enjoy when you bring the animals into the storyline. How they have their own conversations. Makes it such fun. Smart little things aren't they??
Brain rewarded Justin quite nicely for hsi bravery. ;) Their kisses are so....intimate. Even better they are really opening up to each other. Brain is telling Justin about hsi childhood. Can't be easy for him, but we know that Justin will understand.
that whole scene at Stanley's was hilarious. It's hard to believe Michael's presumption! I mean really...who goes to someone's house and assumes they can just invite themselves to stay. Especially someone like Michael.
Wonder if Michael is going to take Albert up on his most obvious offer?
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:26 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid
Love this story, but ewwwww... weasel and sex. Need brain bleach.
~Lorie
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid
It seems Albert's pare bedroom won't be free of charge...
The scene with the bags was hilarious; I loved "the entitlement express".
The scenes with Justin and Brian were funny, tender and very emotional; they have a great relationship growing.
Date: Dec 12, 2017 3:12 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid
Love this story. Of course, I love anytime that Michael is an idiot and you are doing a fine job of showing that.
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:47 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid
Oh Michael, I hope you learn a valuable lesson or two.
Date: Dec 12, 2017 5:40 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid
Love how the animals are being treated. Can't get over Michael inviting himself to move in with Stanley. At least Alberts going to get something out of this. Hehehehe.