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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2018 10:03 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

I'm laughing so hard at Michael right now. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2017 3:50 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

Craig hit Justin growing up?

Brian is going to have a little chat with Mr. Taylor and Mrs. Taylor cause no way is she getting out of feeling the full wrath of one Brian Aiden Kinney!!

Dun, Dun, Dun, Dunnnnnn!!!!

Heathan and Stanley were smart to see the error of their ways, apologize and walk away from Michael for good. (May They Stay Smart:))

 



Author's Response:

Sorry to confuse dear one. It was Brian talking about the first time his dad hit him not Justin. As for Heathan and Stanley let's just say they get to meet Big Bad...who is very protective of the man he loves...dun dun duuuuunnnnnn!!!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 7:36 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

I have to wonder about Catharine's sanity by getting herself involved with Lindsey. I mean really??? She has got to know what she's really like. Ah well....live and learn as they say.

I always enjoy when you bring the animals into the storyline. How they have their own conversations.  Makes it such fun. Smart little things aren't they??

Brain rewarded Justin quite nicely for hsi bravery. ;) Their kisses are so....intimate. Even better they are really opening up to each other. Brain is telling Justin about hsi childhood. Can't be easy for him, but we know that Justin will understand.

that whole scene at Stanley's was hilarious. It's hard to believe Michael's presumption! I mean really...who goes to someone's house and assumes they can just invite themselves to stay. Especially someone like Michael. 

Wonder if Michael is going to take Albert up on his most obvious offer?

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:26 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

 

Love this story, but ewwwww... weasel and sex. Need brain bleach.

~Lorie

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

It seems Albert's pare bedroom won't be free of charge...

The scene with the bags was hilarious; I loved "the entitlement express".

The scenes with Justin and Brian were funny, tender and very emotional; they have a great relationship growing.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 3:12 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

Love this story.  Of course, I love anytime that Michael is an idiot and you are doing a fine job of showing that.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:47 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

Oh Michael, I hope you learn a valuable lesson or two.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 5:40 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

Love how the animals are being treated.  Can't get over Michael inviting himself to move in with Stanley.  At least Alberts going to get something out of this. Hehehehe.

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