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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2018 9:11 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Please tell me that Michael did something to annoy those nice crawling creatures. That would be fun to watch. 

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2017 11:26 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

I really do love your names, puns and anagrams.  The latest 'My dad is Harold Gale of Gale Enterprises' Love it! 

Liking this story, but prob like Carbon Copies more, except can't get my head around the whole 'how they became twins thing'  I know Mpreg stories by their nature are out there but I think this one would give even Mulder palpitations!

Ta Ta

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 5:59 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Hope Tower is a great name for this building!

Justin and Debbie's scene was hilarious, as well as the one with Lindsay and Debbie.

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 1:42 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Haven't reviewed in a long time but feel compelled to do it now.

Girl, this story is sooooo immensely good. I can't stop reading.

The way Michael manages to alienate everybody is really hilarious. He shouldn't keep up otherwise he might be forced to use the YEP services for himself.

The return of Deb and Carl, accompanied by Gilda willl be a very "pleasant" surprise to both Lindsay and Michael who will most likely be told off in Debs usual brash way. 

For them to sell the home to Analise is heartbreaking. 

All the furballs are adorable and I love the odd bit of their way of thinking being written in into the story.

And your recipes at the end of some chapters? I've built myself a nice cookbook by now and will enjoy trying some of them out the coming year.

THank you for the recent update. 3 chapters in a row. You were on fire.

For now I wish you a very Merry Christmas and a New Year full of love, laughter, healt and happiness.

XOXO

MeMa

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2017 9:21 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Just finished 34,35 and 36.  Great updates.  Looooooooooooooove the Harold Gale Enterpries.  You are a wonderfully talented writer.  Can't wait for more of the nasties and their "oh poor me" saga.  Happy Holidays



Author's Response:

Thank you kindly. Happy reading and Happy Holidays to you and yours.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2017 9:19 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Really good. Can someone just beat Michael to death or something already.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2017 7:14 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Whoa, how is Lindsay going to be able to pay the IRS, Norm's and Effy's support??

How much did she squirrel away in her rainy day fund from Gus's support and can she get in trouble for that, especially if she and Brian have a written agreement that money is to be spent on Gus and Only Gus??

Justin standing up to Deb was Amazing and worthy of the respect she showed him and the thank you Brian gave him ;)

Albert is Rich?!?! 

Thank Goodness Michael never knew or he would try to bleed him dry like he tried to do to Brian.

Lindsay is going to try to seduce Norm into paying the IRS for her?

About as likely as Michael winning the lottery lol

Albert was smart to get a lock on his bedroom door and hide his products, Michael believes he is entitled to whatever and whomever he wants and Damn the consequences.

Deb really slammed Lindsay with some hard truths and as usual Lindsay had no comeback because her brain went on vacation lmao.

I don't think Michael should've put nails in the wall to hang up his posters.

This may just cost him more than he thinks.

Albert and Royston have wisen up to Michael and his grandiose behavior and they are stepping back to leave Michael hanging out on the limb by himself.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2017 4:33 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Oh this was wonderful.  Love that Albert is wealthy, so he shouldn't have any trouble getting rid of Michael.

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