Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 4:49 am Title: Chapter 11: General POV

Omg.... that was great!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to write. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Deb

Reviewer: Azabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 11: General POV

Oh my god, that was so funny! I assumed from the start that Michael had been hypnotised to do certain actions every time he repeated his favourite whiny phrases such as “he’s my best friend” 

Honestly, I would love to read more of this- itabwas great and very fun to read- I really wish someone would do that to Michael- but maybe he could also punch himself in the face every time he says “Brian” in a whiny voice ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks! LOL! I figured it would be pretty obvious that he was hypnotized, especially when it happened around even when Justin wasn't around. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have been trying to figure out how to do a sequel, but haven't managed it yet.

If this had really happened to Mikey maybe he would have gotten a clue and grown up! LOL!

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 11: General POV

So it would seem that anything which pertains to Brian and Justin has Michael flapping like a chicken and howling at the moon....LOL I say Charles and Marilyn will have many such times to teach Michael to stop being an asshole...the hard way! This was so much better than the electroshock therapy I was hoping for. I would feel sad for him but...nah, my feelings are set up that way. Faux-Daddy's revenge was excellent! 

Enjoyed this very much!

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

Yay! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! I always figured that Charles Novotny would not be a happy camper with people thinking Michael was his kid.

Electroshock therapy... hmmmm... now there's a thought! LOL! Maybe Ben will stick Michael's dick in an outlet when they get home; that might shock Michael back to reality!

Thank you for reading and all the review!

Hugs,

Deb

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2017 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 11: General POV

First I thought Mickey was having tics, Later came the idea of him going crazy.        Then hypnosis came to mind and in the end I just thought; Possessed.

I giggled all the time while reading this one. HILARIOUS!!

Nice, really, really nice.

XOXO

MeMa

Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and it made you laugh! It was a lot of fun to write, especially coming up with all the little moves that Michael would make. Thank you again for reading and reviewing.

Hugs,

Deb

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2017 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 11: General POV

Oh yes Michael out of everyone's life! Mysterious Marilyn is really scary with all her powers! It was funny ! Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it. I have always enjoyed Mysterious Marilyn and her scary powers. LOL! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Deb

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2017 6:02 am Title: Chapter 11: General POV

That was so awesome. I thought he was hypnotized. The ghost was great.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. It was a lot of fun to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Deb

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 11: General POV

Omg.omg...omg...that was fantastic..loved it...thank u.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so happy that you loved it. Thank you for reading and all the reviews!

Deb