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Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2018 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Lullaby of Birdland

The good thing justin is a man so he can sleep in the same room as brian without being married lol... 

they are so cute napping together

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2017 4:27 am Title: Chapter 8 - Lullaby of Birdland

I'm glad to see that they were able to hook up.  Maybe once Justin's rested they can enjoy the bed.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Lullaby of Birdland

It's funny how Justin was discovering Brian's stuff: maybe would he have found a condom in the items he didn't check. His reaction to the phone was funny. At least, he saw Gus. I guess the date wasn't displayed with the year, otherwise he would have had some more questions to ask Brian.

The reactions Brian had with his bare torso were hilarious, either from the hotel employee or Justin's.

A nap? Really?

I can't wait how Brian will manage to use a modern condom.



Author's Response:

Wow! I didn't even think about including a condom in there. Thanks for the great suggestion. Now, how *IS* Brian going to explain that . . . when we get there. And, no, I checked my own phone when I was writing that part and the year doesn't show up with the date on the screen (I'm trying to be very precise with details here, but if you catch me out on something, I'll give you a holler). TAG

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2017 6:32 am Title: Chapter 8 - Lullaby of Birdland


"Applesauce! He's . . . gorgeous!" LOL.. I love the 'applesauce'. There's a striking difference in the everyday behavior of people 75 years apart in time. I can remember just during my own life how differently I talked and acted with people in the 60s and 70s and the way I interact with them now. I'd have scared my younger self to death! LOL. 

This is so nice, to see a Brian who isn't chomping at the bit to be his studly self, who's taking his time and just enjoying his life, getting to really know someone. And worry about someone. I really love this story. I'm scared about Hobbs being in it though... Dun-dun-dun.... 

Can't wait for the next installment and see what little surprises Brian brings back from the future nexst time! Drawing paper and pencils, perhaps. Would they be hard to come by in WWII England?



Author's Response:

We were going over the lists of 1940s slang when I saw that ‘Applesauce’ was a mild expletive of the time and I could just SEE our innocent little Justin saying it. It fits him. 😊. Thanks for the suggestion for Brian’s next treat from the future. Excellent suggestion! TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2017 2:33 am Title: Chapter 8 - Lullaby of Birdland

What a fun chapter! I love Justin's little "happy dance" around the hotel room. 

I suppose in order to be successful as a fighter pilot, Justin has to "separate" himself a bit from the reality of it. 



Author's Response:

Can't you just see Justin twirling around the room all romantically? LOLOLOLOL. TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2017 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Lullaby of Birdland

Well, well well, both boys were extremely busy. Haha well I'm sure Justin wanted to make his note sound totally generic, just in case someone else read it. Ya know Justin's snooping is going to complicate things right? He'll find something besides the cell phone and Brian will have to tell him he's from the future. Justin will probably think he's fallen for an insane person. Lol yes the flirting and snuggling was adorable but I want sex! Hee hee I mean, THEY want sex... 



Author's Response:

I don't think *THIS* Justin is ready for our Brian . . . give him time, though. He's still the spunky little fireball we all love under that provincial 20th Century mien. TAG

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