Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2017 11:58 am Title: Chapter 11 - All The Things You Are.

Oooooo.... Now it gets complicated! The setting of a war is perfect for this kind of plot. Brian can, at least for a while, pass off his knowledge as some kind of secret info from the war spy game. Still, can  you image a RAF officer trying to wrap his mind around the fact that he's going out with some kind of spy!!! Oh, the intrigue! 

Your mention of the 'ovens' actually shocked me a little. I guess I was getting into the past mindset and wasn't expecting it. Lord... imagine having to explain THAT to someone with no historical knowledge of it! There's no way they're going to believe at first that human beings could be that monstrous. And, god help me, I can't help comparing that to our situation today. (Now, I'm going to go hide under a bed somewhere for a couple of years.) 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 11 - All The Things You Are.

Oh no, the phone is still working as an alarm: too bad!

Justin was already intrigued by this thing and now Brian has to explain it. What a mood-killer!

Telling Justin to be careful wasn't a great idea: he is so prompt to serve the country that helped him becoming a pilot that he can't stay away from the fight. Brian is right: it could change the future and he won't be able to prevent anything else. Tough choice.

Mr. Hobbs is the other dangerous element in this story. Is he also in the army? I would guess so in such a period. If yes, is he also in the RAF?

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2017 2:09 am Title: Chapter 11 - All The Things You Are.

Brian's light box thing sure is annoying! Lol Justin is definitely going to think Brian is some sort of spy, imo. Fancy gadgets and all. Can't wait to see how he handles him actually being from the future. Freaking Hobbs, perfect timing. Ugh