Reviewer: DavidR Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2017 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Oh Where Can You Be

     Applesauce, I make a mistake in my last feedback.  Yes of course, if Brian were to bring Gus over it would be in the present time.  I just got confused.  Applesauce!

    The story is wonderful.  I can see that you guys spent much time researching.  That must be so interesting.  Brian has a lot of explaining to do, like how he knew to go to The Strand for shelter.

But there is so much more.  After I finished the chapter, I took apart my flashlight and looked at the batteries.  Applesauce, sure enough, mine expire in 2025.  Who is going to explain that to Harry and/or his mom when his batteries need replacement.    Plus, there must be expiration dates on the packages Brian used on Justin’s injuries.  Not important at all.  Not at all!  My explanation is that when Brian goes back in time, the dates on whatever he brings from the current/future changes to the past.  Hey, Readers have their 1st Amendment rights too.

     Wonderful story.  As you can see, I am fully involved even to the point of making up my own explanations.  I do look forward to each new chapter.

     Once again, sorry for the mistake in my last Feedback.  Applesauce!

DavidR

 

 

Author's Response:

Your review cracked us up! Applesauce! LOL. We forgive you for the error. Love hearing how involved you are in the story - even to the point of taking apart your own flashlight. Of course, Harry is only 3 and probably can't read so even if he took apart his new flashlight, he wouldn't understand the expiration date on the batteries. But he *WILL* have a tough time replacing them . . . I don't know if they had AAA batteries back then (will have to immediately research). Let's hope Brian used really good, long lasting batteries, right? As for the rest of the stuff Brian's using from the future, luckily, most people don't read all that fine print on stuff, right? Of course, Justin isn't most people and he *IS* quite observant so he might catch on  . . . or maybe not. Hehehe. Yes, we have done a ton of research on this story - we started back in the summer and have now gone so far as to research even what kind of condoms they used then. We try to be thorough. Over Thanksgiving break TAG even went so far as to enlist her vet step-dad in explaing the sounds incendiary bombs make when they drop. =)   Glad you're enjoying this so much. And there's so much more to come. Applesauce! TAG & Sally.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2017 6:34 am Title: Chapter 15 - Oh Where Can You Be

Poor kids all alone in the streets.

Can't wait for the big reunion! Happy writing!