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Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 2:36 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Love the cliffhanger, this plot is warming up nicely! 

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2018 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Justin have right to get mad at brian. He cheated on him. It seems like justin found brian secret door

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

OMG! They really fight! 

This was actually hard to read because it's pretty realistic. We've all had these 'I love them, but..." heartbreaking level fights, and this was a doozy. Brian's getting a whole new level of emotional resistance from Justin. Brian isn't dealing with someone in the 'family' here. They are used to his emotional disappearing acts, they know him and where they come from, even if they don't like it, and they'll accept him back because they have their own network of connections to him outside of their own relationship to him. Justin doesn't have that. He knows nothing about Brian's life other than 'their' times together. He had no idea if Brian was dead or alive or in jail or on Mt. Olympus or what! Don't blame him for being pissed!

In Brian's defense, it's rather difficult to judge the needs of someone from a historical era when being able to check up on someone who 'disappears' is pretty much not a thing. Up to now, this has been a diversion for him, even if the danger is apparent when he's in 1941, he isn't  really IN 1941 in his head. Bombed out cities aren't part of his skill set. But Lucky - that made a difference because it was at least something that he could identify with.

Good, good, good job. Now, Justin has a mystery to solve!



Author's Response:

SOOOOOO glad to hear you are still enjoying this one. And of course, real couples have real fights - no matter how much you love someone you don't always agree with them. And both our characters are busy learning and growing here. This is the first real relationship for both of them, so they have a lot of adjusting to do. Frankly, I'm surprised Justin wasn't even more pissed at Brian. I would have slugged him myself. LOL! Now, on to write the really fun stuff. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Bewitched doesn't begin to discribe it.  Justin isn't some silly nance boy,  My guess is he'll investigate.  How and what happens is a mystery.



Author's Response:

They both seem pretty bewitched by the other, huh? You're right, though, Justin is a brave little f**ker and he wouldn't turn away from a challenge like that. Besides, he has to go rescue his boyfriend, right? LOL Off to write. TAG & Sally!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 2:24 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Holy shit! I knew Justin was going to 'see' something like that! So awesome! Is he too scared to move? Does he follow Brian into the passage? Will he get caught in the 21st century himself? Omg! Great ending to a chapter!



Author's Response:

Can you imagine YOUR reaction to watching your boyfriend disappear in front of your very eyes? What would you do? Freak out completely I expect.... but then again, this Justin is a brave little RAF pilot who faces death and mayhem daily, so who knows.... We are having so much fun writing this. Glad you’re enjoying it too! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 10:34 am Title: Chapter 25 - Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Yeah, Brian got his shit together and went back to 1941, with a little push from an unaware Cynthia.

That was a close call with Hobbs!

I bet Justin will try to find out how Brian could have disappeared; the question is: will you let him go through the portal and arrive in present time all alone?

I loved the "rattlesnake on steroids".



Author's Response:

You knew Brian couldn’t stay away from his Blue Eyes forever, though - we were actually surprised he lasted a week. Lol. But thanks to Cynthia and some timely intervention from the Universe at large, he realized how much he needed his flyboy! Lol. What can we say about Hobbs, other than that he’s an excellent bad guy! And now, off to write about Justin’s reaction to the disappearing boyfriend trick. *typing away* TAG & Sally

Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 10:11 am Title: Chapter 25 - Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Wow! Just wow! Great chapter. I've been waiting for it since the beginning of the story. Can't wait to see how Justin will like 2016 once he gets there. And oh, how naive can Chris Hobbs be! Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks for your excellent suggestion about the WWII movies! Don’t think Justin will care for the future much, though - at least not a first. Can you imagine the shock of that discovery? Off to write more! TAG & Sally

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 3:15 am Title: Chapter 25 - Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Oh, Wow.  What an amazing chapter.  Your writing is just getting better & better.  Can't wait to see how this situation gets handled.



Author's Response:

*Blushing* Thank you. And this is a BIG, BIG, BIG chapter too - it's been a long time coming. So happy to hear you liked it. There is so much exciting stuff coming . . .  TAG & Sally

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