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Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 1:03 am Title: Chapter 30 - Strange Fruit

I will be freaking out too just like justin.

Reviewer: DavidR Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Strange Fruit

    I just knew going to the bar was going to a problem.  I figured

there may be a plaque and a picture of Justin with the comment

below, ‘In memory of Justin Taylor” and some description of his

plane downed over …whatever.  I simply didn’t believe that Justin

was killed.  That was my thought.

   Talking to Lottie was worse.  I don’t know, I simply don’t I don/t

know.

            "after he was lost, Gran . . .

            She never really quite got over what happened to him,” 

     This is not what I expected.  Not good, not good at all, or am I overthing this?

     Anyway, terrific story.  It is the kind that you can walk away from the screen,but not the story.

    DavidR

Reviewer: Tsum tsum Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 1:11 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Strange Fruit

I hope your doing what I hope your doing otherwise it be to sad and I don’t like to sad



Author's Response:

*cue the evil author's laughing . . .* TAG & Sally

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 7:06 am Title: Chapter 30 - Strange Fruit

The dream is morphing into a nightmare: it's hard to hear about your disappearance from the past that hasn't happened yet.



Author's Response:

Exactly! Justin wasn't ready to hear that part - so of course he fled before he heard the whole story. Now Brian has to go find his flustered blond. TAG & Sally.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 4:42 am Title: Chapter 30 - Strange Fruit

Well he had to go back so he and Daphne could take that picture.  I'm not sure how I'd take it if I learned I was going to die in the past.



Author's Response:

Yep. I'm sure all of us would have trouble hearing about the circumstances of our death beforehand . . . TAG & Sally.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 3:00 am Title: Chapter 30 - Strange Fruit

Definitely not the fun side of a trip to the future. I could feel Justin's pain when it dawned on him that, other than Brian, he was completely alone in this time.

So hard to hear Lottie say the words: 

Well, after he was lost, Gran . . . She never really quite got over what happened to him,”

Enjoying this so much!



Author's Response:

Nope. It would definitely be tough to have the fact of your impending death thrown in your face. I think we'd all have a similar reaction. We are such evil authors, huh? Now, off to write them out of this latest mess. TAG & Sally.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 3:00 am Title: Chapter 30 - Strange Fruit

What a great chapter.  Imagine something like that happening for real.  It would be amazing and definitely scary.  This story is getting better and better.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words, that means so much to us that you're enjoying this!

If something like this happened in real life, it would be SO scary. I don't know what would be scarier, going back in time or walking into the future, both seem terrifying. 

~Sally & TAG

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