[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2017 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Where or When
Well at least they'll get a good night's sleep. Is Hobbs going to be a problem?
Author's Response:
Hobbs is ALWAYS a problem.... TAG & Sally
Date: Dec 06, 2017 1:21 am Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Plot? Who needs plot? Smut is Great! TAG, you spent an hour getting 'inspired' huh? Lol Sally, of course you only watched the rimming videos for academic purposes lmao what a great chapter!
Date: Dec 05, 2017 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Plotty or porny: it's always a great pleasure to read.
It was very interesting to find out how Brian was able to make Justin black out.
Appelsauce, that was hot!
It was also nice to see that Justin didn't want to know what will happen on the 19th. He was torn between his loyalty to the RAF and his attraction to Brian. Tough choice, but it was the right to make in such period. Daphne, on the other hand, just asked if any shelter would do.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
I am so enjoying this story. But I still worry about what could and will happen.
Author's Response:
We're so glad you're enjoying this story, just know how much we love our boys, so the probability of this being a good ending is very high ;) That doesn't mean there wont be some bumps along the road hehe.
~SunshineSally and TAG
Date: Dec 05, 2017 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Hiya ladies,
Just a very short review.
You two are writing a delightful story. I'm absolutely spellbound by it.
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it.
XOXO
MeMa
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much, that is such a wonderful comment and it means so much to us that you are not only reading our story, but loving it.
We hope you like what we have planned :)
~SunshineSally and TAG
Date: Dec 05, 2017 5:23 am Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Great chapter. I like plot more than poon, but that's just me.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, we really appreciate it.
I promise you, that as porny and non-plotty this chapter may have seemed, it was actually quite important for Justin. One of the biggest aspects of this story is seeing how being gay affects each of our boys in both 1941 and 2016. So, making sure Justin understands ALL the wonders of what being a gay man entails is in fact very important for his character development. This may make more sense later, but stick with us, we promise it'll be worth it.
~SunshineSally and TAG
Date: Dec 05, 2017 2:14 am Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Well, well, well. What else can I say. Readers were worned about what the chapter was about. LOL And, yes the plot was there, wasn't it????
Author's Response:
The plot most definitely was there. Yes, it was disguised in smut, but that smut was actually quite important for Justin and his character development. Justin is learning what it's like to be a gay man, not only from the master but from someone that is very proud of who he is. Yes, Brian can't walk around 1941 shouting at the top of his lungs that he likes fucking guys, but he stills oozes sexual confidence, and that is something Justin needs to see.
Stick with us, it'll make more sense later :)
Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
~SunshineSally and TAG
Date: Dec 01, 2017 6:53 am Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
The best line of the night anywhere: "Who wanted a large shaking bullet?" OMG! The best line ever!
Now we get into the meat and potatoes of the story - just who, oh who IS Brian Kinney and where is he getting all this stuff/info? Hmmm....
I think we forget just how far we have come in marketing, packaging, etc in just the last three or four decades. When I was in high school, I bought a cordless shaver for my friend who was going into the Army. It was really kind of a new thing, at least where we lived, and he was floored by it. And that was in 1971, not 1941! LOL.
I'm really really really eager to see how Brian will handle having to actually disclose the truth. Will Justin threaten to end it if he doesn't? Will it be because Justin no longer sees the 'romance' of war? Will it be because Brian fears that the portal will close for some reason? Oh, the possibilities!
Loved this chapter, and look forward to more 'discoveries' and the ensuing drama.
Date: Dec 01, 2017 2:50 am Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
They are just too cute together! What is Brian going to come up with to explain all his gadgets, let alone how he knew The Palace was never bombed? When will he tell Justin the truth? Loved all the teasing he had to endure. Lol
Author's Response:
You'll just have to wait and see :P
~Sally and TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Brian being psychic! I like it.
Author's Response:
Oh no - don’t say things like that . . . You’ll encourage yet another plot bunny attack with that kind of suggestion! Lol. TAG
Date: Nov 30, 2017 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
OMG that's so brilliant. Justin's sweet naivety about the dildo and safe sex (from the previous chapter). Bathroom scene was great, I'm laughing at Brian for his vanity. Anti-wrinkle creme lol. For a moment I was worried that there will be drama as Justin was thinking about leaving Brian, but luckily he knows better. Daphne is clever, thinking about a supernatural explanation... just not this one! How long untill they figure Brian out? Or till Brian outs himself? Ich bin gespannt, as would the Gerries say.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Another terrific chapter. The plot is thickening and I love it.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Justin discovering Brian's gadgets is hilarious; the way he describes the items is interesting and we can see how disturbing it is for him. The shaking bullet is the best of what you thought Brian could have in his bag.
Daphne's remark about the fact that Brian didn't want to go to the shelter is going to bother Justin and I hope he will ask Brian why.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16 - In The Mood.
Oh yes, I enjoyed very much! Hot hot hot!!!! 1940's Justin is so adorable! Now he's going to want to do it all the time. Lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2017 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 16 - In The Mood.
Very nice look at a first time. The question is does Brian stay with his Blue-eyes or does Blue-eyes go back with Andsom. Tuff question.
Date: Nov 28, 2017 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Oh Where Can You Be
This story is amazing. I love it so much.
Can you tell me what is APPLESAUCE?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing, we're so happy you're enjoying the story.
Applesauce was used as a swear word or explanative back in the 20s, 30's and 40's. I.e. "Applesauce, I can't believe what we just did, Brian."
~Sally and TAG
Date: Nov 28, 2017 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 16 - In The Mood.
Hot and hilarious!!! What a great combination! Wonderful chapter!
Applesauce is back!
The reaction of Justin about the date on the condom is very funny. His naivety is as sweet as hilarious and Brian doesn't laugh easily.
Date: Nov 28, 2017 7:05 pm Title: Chapter 16 - In The Mood.
Great chapter. Love when Brian & Justin are happy, but I know that tough times will come before I hopefully get my "happy ending". You all are brillant writers.
Date: Nov 27, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Lover, Come Back To Me
Hiya ladies,
Read all this in one go.
A couple of words:
MAGIC, MAGNIFICENT, GORGEOUS!!!
That's all folks!!!
XOXO
MeMa
Author's Response:
Awww, MeMa, that is one of the nicest comments. Thank you so much. We appreciate it <3
~Sally and TAG
Date: Nov 27, 2017 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Oh Where Can You Be
Applesauce, I make a mistake in my last feedback. Yes of course, if Brian were to bring Gus over it would be in the present time. I just got confused. Applesauce!
The story is wonderful. I can see that you guys spent much time researching. That must be so interesting. Brian has a lot of explaining to do, like how he knew to go to The Strand for shelter.
But there is so much more. After I finished the chapter, I took apart my flashlight and looked at the batteries. Applesauce, sure enough, mine expire in 2025. Who is going to explain that to Harry and/or his mom when his batteries need replacement. Plus, there must be expiration dates on the packages Brian used on Justin’s injuries. Not important at all. Not at all! My explanation is that when Brian goes back in time, the dates on whatever he brings from the current/future changes to the past. Hey, Readers have their 1st Amendment rights too.
Wonderful story. As you can see, I am fully involved even to the point of making up my own explanations. I do look forward to each new chapter.
Once again, sorry for the mistake in my last Feedback. Applesauce!
DavidR
Your review cracked us up! Applesauce! LOL. We forgive you for the error. Love hearing how involved you are in the story - even to the point of taking apart your own flashlight. Of course, Harry is only 3 and probably can't read so even if he took apart his new flashlight, he wouldn't understand the expiration date on the batteries. But he *WILL* have a tough time replacing them . . . I don't know if they had AAA batteries back then (will have to immediately research). Let's hope Brian used really good, long lasting batteries, right? As for the rest of the stuff Brian's using from the future, luckily, most people don't read all that fine print on stuff, right? Of course, Justin isn't most people and he *IS* quite observant so he might catch on . . . or maybe not. Hehehe. Yes, we have done a ton of research on this story - we started back in the summer and have now gone so far as to research even what kind of condoms they used then. We try to be thorough. Over Thanksgiving break TAG even went so far as to enlist her vet step-dad in explaing the sounds incendiary bombs make when they drop. =) Glad you're enjoying this so much. And there's so much more to come. Applesauce! TAG & Sally.
Author's Response:
Date: Nov 26, 2017 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Oh Where Can You Be
Oh poor Sunshine, so worried about his friends & his man! And of course Brian has the 'magic stuff' to fix him right up. Can't wait to see how he's going to explain the future to him or that's where he comes from. Oh boy!
Date: Nov 26, 2017 6:34 am Title: Chapter 15 - Oh Where Can You Be
Poor kids all alone in the streets.
Can't wait for the big reunion! Happy writing!
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2017 3:24 am Title: Chapter 15 - Oh Where Can You Be
Wow. So realistic.
Author's Response:
Thank you! That’s what we’re aiming for. TAG & Sally!
Date: Nov 25, 2017 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 14 - God Bless The Child.
Well, RL has really been cutting into my Fic reading time... but somehow, I manage to find a few minutes to get caught up on my favorites.
I certainly hope Justin made it safely through the raid. Hard to imagine how Brian must have felt experiencing things he's only previously read about. I also didn't realize that most people at the time were not aware of the existence of the concentration camps.
Great job! Will be anxiously awaiting the next update.
Date: Nov 25, 2017 1:08 am Title: Chapter 14 - God Bless The Child.
Awwwwwww Brian taking care of everybody. Prejudice in the 40's, considering everyone's economic status. So sad and infuriating. I don't blame Brian going off like that. Harry is so cute! His mom was so grateful. Great chapter!