Date: Jan 04, 2018 12:16 am Title: Chapter 3
I would love to become invested in this story, but I'm having a hard time with all the spelling and grammatical errors. I'm sure I'll get ripped a new one for saying anything.
Date: Dec 05, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 3
Loving this story. Cant wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2017 12:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Yay-I was so excited to see an update to this story- I’m absolutely loving it! Jealous Michael and Lindsay are so deluded in their fantasies, can’t wait to see them get knocked back with a big dose of reality ;) I’m glad your feeling better- looking forward to reading more of this awesome story soon :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow! How nice that Hunter has people he can rely on. Michael doesn't seem to know he's in trouble. Glad to see that Ben isn't taking it anymore. Can't wait to find out what Lindsay thinks she'll be doing.
Date: Dec 04, 2017 7:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Sorry you will sick. Hope all is better now. Terrible to be sick so close to the holidays. Love this story. If I were a writer instead of a reader, I, too, would always make Michael & Lindsay the idiots that so many writers like doing including you. Keep up the good work.
Date: Dec 04, 2017 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yay Ben. Took him long enough to boot him out the door. Michael could try living with Deb, but I doubt she'd want him.
Ha! Michael eyeing up Britin. Yeah like he'll ever have a key or get to live there. Same for Lindsay. Alrhough her reaction is going to be worse because she'll curse Justin for having what she truly wants. The manor and the man.
Feel bad for both Melanie and Ben for living with blinders on. They're going to lose so much, but not as much as their spouses.
Ben will find someone who will love him the most. Mel will find just the right someone for her. Michael will lose Ben, Hunter, and Brian. Lindsay will be completely alone. No wife, no dream fantasy lover, no nothing for she'll probably lose it enough to lose her one tie to Brian. Gus.
Can tell Brian's really glad Justin's home for good. He's happy.