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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2018 4:24 pm Title: Backstabbing...The Knives Are Out

I bet Justin also fixed Brian's phone.

Deb is so mean, impolite, rude: how dares she take the call like she was at home.

It's great that Ben gave Brian the paper asking to call Mel, who is surprisingly quite nice to Brian.

Lindsey doesn't even think what is going to hit her, badly.



Author's Response:

Justin is omni present in Brian's life without Brian even knowing it (yet).

And believe me Lindz might be in for a big surprise

Thanks for your review. It's really appreciated.

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2018 4:19 am Title: Backstabbing...The Knives Are Out

Of course it was Mr. Slim.  He's the fix-it man.  Lindsay lied but it came true.  It appears her lies are coming back to haunt her.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2018 3:42 am Title: Backstabbing...The Knives Are Out

Poor Brian, the idiots just cannot leave him alone.  But, it makes such a good plot that you deal so well with.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2018 3:41 am Title: Backstabbing...The Knives Are Out

Mel needs to seriously get over her animosity towards Brian because at the moment the problem is her Bitch Wife and her need for money.

I feel for Brian having to deal with Mama Loud-Mouth Wannabe Drag Queen and her Whiny Bitch Cub, then again maybe Ben needs more sympathy because he has to travel with them, or maybe the passengers need the sympathy cause they have to hear them through the whole flight and their voices can penetrate through steel <shudders>

Lindsay used a lie to get Brian to run to her with his checkbook and now Gus is really sick, but it won't save her from the Ass whipping she so deserves.

And since Daphne is coming with Brian I hope she brought her taser which I think should be called The Bliss Zapper.

One zap from that taser and Your World is Bliss, While They Twitch lol ;)

So Lindsay was getting pretty for Brian?

Going to take more than a shower to do that and paper bags are on strike ;) Hell her make up is hiding under the bed and her clothes are getting ready to jump in a landfill rofl.

Mr. Slim strikes again, that picture is adorable Gus will love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for a most wonderful review.

It had us all in stitches. I;d love to see Daphne using The Bliss Zapper several more times in this story.

Let's see what we might come up with

XOXO

Soirsa

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