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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 3:51 am Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind

The fact that Deb shouted as loud as she could at Brian's door that she would beat him worse than Jack did, goes to show that every ounce of affection she ever gave Brian was fake.

Deb lied the moment she met Brian and has been lying to him ever since.

She and Michael used Brian because he was bigger, stronger and smarter so he could protect Michael from the bullies and help him graduate.

For Michael being such a weak little Shit he was smart to leech onto Brian, and Deb used that abused child to keep Michael happy.

It doesn't take a genius to realize that even if Brian had finished that hand job he still wouldn't have chosen Michael.

Every cruel thing Michael, Deb and Lindsay have ever said to Brian or anyone else, they disguise it with I Didn't Mean It, I was Joking, Brian Knows I was Just Joking.

That's there tell when they are lying and have been caught at it, and it is also them being truthful when Brian doesn't do or give them what they want.

Everyone in the building heard the Drag Queen Harpy screeching so how long before it gets back to Brian?

Or Cynthia, Ted, Emmett, Carl and everyone else on Liberty Avenue???



Author's Response:

When you would look up the word "user" in the dictionary it would show a picture of Debs and Michael. They are, in this story, the ultimate users followed closely by Lindsay.

It's good to know that Brian has more and better friends to fall back on. Especially Mr. Slim.


XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 9:33 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind

Hilarious! You got some funny names for Debbie and Michael; I love "Empress of Entitlement and her Equerry of Egregiousness".

Poor policemen who will have to deal with this pair, and maybe this trio.



Author's Response:

We do love to come up with nicknames. And let me tell you Miss Merlot is really good at it.

Thanks for reviewing.

XOXO

Soirsa

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 6:33 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind

Oh this should be good Lindsay is going back to Pittsburgh to join up with Deb and Michael, perhaps they should save places for them in a cell because they will be there often.

Not surprised Deb threatens to beat Brian worse than Jack did she is so vile and putrid that she needs to be in a cell for the rest of her life.

She, Michael and Lindsay think they are entitled to ride on Brian's coattails and unlimited access to his money forever.

They are the worst sort of parasites because not only do they suck you dry but they leave you so weak that you can't fight back anymore.

Daphne was smart to warn Cynthia and to take Brian to Ted's place, at least he will get some peace and quiet.

So what fantastic plan will the Whiny Bunch come up with next?

Michael should really just rent a bed at the hospital he is there so often lol

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 3:09 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind

Another great chapter.  You would think from all the times Michael has hit his head some sense would prevail, but then again the story wouldn't be nearly as good. 



Author's Response:

hiya,

personally I think that all that hitting of the head must have scrambled the few remaining braincells Michael had in such a bad way that I fear they stopped working completely. ;)

XOXO

Soirsa

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 2:06 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind

Love how Deb didn't get her way.  Looks like Lindsay will be joining Deb and Mikey in their new abode.  Love your names for them too.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 12:11 pm Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind

Awesome chapter

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 8:46 am Title: Starting to Cut the Ties that Bind

It nice they take care of Brian, but we need more Justin.



Author's Response:

Hiya, thanks for the review.

We, the authors, believe in a slow build up. So you will have to wait a little bit longer.

Justin time is coming up soon.

XOXO

Soirsa

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