Date: Jun 23, 2019 3:16 pm Title: The Notebook...Or a Bad Riff Thereon
Oh my god!!!! I want to eviscerate them with a blunt spoon, b@**@ds! Sorry, not sorry! Such fanfuckingtastic writing though! Bravo!!
Date: Mar 14, 2018 10:06 pm Title: The Notebook...Or a Bad Riff Thereon
So it's been awhile since I reviewed and for that I'm very sorry. I'm finally caught up now though.
Their trip sounded lovely! Snotti Lotti certainly got her cummupence. Very amusing.
Lindsey I'm predicting is going to try to clain Brian as the father. Hopefully she's not tha stupid. Too easy to discredit. Who though. I'm guessing that lawyer dude.
There have been moments when I think there's is a miniscule chance of deb coming around, but then I realiz nope...not gonna happen.
I am REALLY looking forward to what Brian et al have up their sleeve as far as Deb and Michael are concerned. they are going to have to leave the freaking state, never mind Liberty Ave.
My goodness....I'm actually in tears rn writing this having just finished reading Brian's reaction. I can't even imagine the unbelievable pain......
Seriously girl.................the emotions you are able to instil in us a readers is crazy. I actually have gotten in angry moods because of Deb, Michale andLindsey. LOL
Love it!!!!!!!!
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hello Elaine,
*handing you tissues*
Thank you for your lovely review.
We, the authors, are very happy we are able to let our readers go through the motions with our boys.
One tip: Go and get a big box of tissues for it will be a bumpy ride in the next few chapters.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Mar 13, 2018 10:14 pm Title: The Notebook...Or a Bad Riff Thereon
Okay... now it's time for my first feedback on this site... bad English be damned ...
Hi MissMerlot & Team,
First of all: you are such an awesome Writer and I'm sooo jealous of the quality and sheer amount of work output you have! (my own german-speaking muse is on vacation - unfortunately since many many months...)
You know, I realy don't like Michael at all. He is one of the characters that rubed me the wrong way since I knew about QaF. (Lindsay on regular basis and Debbie on ocassion are the others)
But I could never put my finger on the problem I had with little Mikey ... I knew that he must have a mental disease, but it never became clear what it may be - but because of this story, I know for the first time what Michael's diagnosis would be: He's a psychopath. A pathological liar, well practised conman and manipulator without conscience or remorse.
There is a test called 'Hare Psychopathy Checklist-Revised (PCL-R)'. If you take a look at the listed criteria and applies it to Michael you will know what is going on.
And now I'm so looking forward to his inevitable annihilation... and Debbie's as well. Lindsay's downfall too, but she dosen't need any help; she is working like a busy little worker bee all on her own on her social demise and alienation of friends and family.
The Novotnys on the other side will learn what they to this day never wanted to lern: they aren't the hub of the universe and nobody owes them anything!
I anticipate the gang will teach the Novotnys the meaning of remorse and realy rally around Brian, because we all know that eventually he will crumble - emotionaly, mentaly and if they aren't carefull physical as well. My hopes lie with Justin and his ability to catch his big guy when it comes to it.
I'm looking forward to the next update - on all your stories. They are simply great. I will try to leave a comment once in a while, but that's realy difficult for me, because I suck at writing in english.
So sorry for my mistakes and I hope you kann understand what I was trying to say...
many greatings from Germany
Katharina
Author's Response:
Hallo Katharina,
First of all; Thank you for giving us your first review on this site. We feel honored. Seriously!!
Second: No need to apologize for your bad English for it isn't bad at all. But should you feel more at ease reviewing in German, feel free to do so. Ich spreche und schreibe Deutsch. Und kann übersetzen fur die nicht Deutsch sprechenden mitglieder im Team.
Wir versprechen dir hier und jetzt, die Abrechnung mit Michael und Debbie wird episch werden.
The only thing we can tell everybody is: Hold on to your chair folks, this is going to be one hell of a ride.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2018 7:25 pm Title: The Notebook...Or a Bad Riff Thereon
OOOOHH SHIIITTTT!!!
There is no where Michael and Deb can hide that Brian won't find them he is not on just a Destroy Mission anymore, this Is Complete Annihilation when he gets through there won't even be dust.
Brian almost hitting Justin shows just how deep this betrayal is and how they will need to make sure Michael and Deb stay away from him at the Annihilation Party.
So Deb did know did she also keep notebooks and report to Jack?
They are so disgusting and evil that they make the devil cringe, they used Brian for their own selfish reasons and now this isn't Payback, It's The End, Not The Beginning of It, Just THE END.
Time To Take It All, Even The Crumbs!!!
Lindsay's pregnancy is her problem Brian has enough on his plate right now, though she might want to look into a facelift seems her outside is starting to match the inside lol
This chapter was painful and got me teary-eyed
Author's Response:
Hiya,
Yes, the shit has started to hit the fan and the total annihilation too.
This chapter is the beginning of an epic smackdown for Michael and Debbie.
They really deserve everything coming their way.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Mar 13, 2018 5:24 pm Title: The Notebook...Or a Bad Riff Thereon
Good chapter. Now the mystery of the notebooks is out. Thanks for the add of Walgreens. Worked for them for years.
Author's Response:
Hiya,
Yep, the cesspool has openend up and the shit is starting to hit the fan.
And about the Walgreens add? You're welcome.
Now buckle in, fasten your seatbelt and get ready for a hell of a ride.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Mar 13, 2018 4:36 pm Title: The Notebook...Or a Bad Riff Thereon
The beginning was hilarious, except Michael yelling after Gus.
The end is so sad and the adjective is really not enough to describe what is happening.
Author's Response:
Hiya,
This chapter was like a rollercoaster ride wasn't it? The Mel and Ben tease had me in giggles too. We all had fun writing that particular scene.
I couldn't find the right adjective for the end of the story either. I came up with devestating but that barely scratches the surface.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2018 1:48 pm Title: The Notebook...Or a Bad Riff Thereon
Pregnant by whom? Brian needs to be given something to calm him down. Those books are enough to hurt anyone. I'm sure Mr. Slim will forgive him for what he almost did once he learns the cause. Deb and Michael are in for a world of hurt as pay back.
Author's Response:
Oh believe me the pay back for Deb and Michael will be beyond painfull
And you know what? They deserve everything coming to them
XOXO
Soirsa