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Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2022 7:38 am Title: Celebrating Love...What Belongs Together Comes Together

I thought sweet potato make Justin boke?!?

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2018 8:45 am Title: Celebrating Love...What Belongs Together Comes Together

sorry, there was something lost... had a nice little picture, but I seem unable to put in in here and it has eaten the rest of my review...


and I slip from one rant into another.

I really like how Brian's and Justin's relationship is progressing. And it is nice to see a story where Brian can cook. The Kids and the Dads are another point that’s simply sweet. *g*
I'm looking forward to the Witches Sabbath also known as Debbie and Joanie-Showdown and how long does it take for Mel to register that Deb has broken the restrain order as she was clearly too close to her in the store? I'm seeing an arrest in the near future of one Ms. Debbie Novotny…

I'm waiting impatient for more reading material

Greetings from the finally warming Franconia
Later…
Katharina



Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful review.

I guess Debs will never change and it looks to me that as you stated, she found another witch to work with. Love the term Witches Sabbath by the way. 

We are busy writing the next chapter.

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2018 8:41 am Title: Celebrating Love...What Belongs Together Comes Together

Hey Ladies,

 

I don't get it. I really do not understand it! Why the heck can't Debbie see that she is heading straight for hell? In every sense of the word.

 

I really don't expect anything else from Michael; he is just that stupid, even if he thinks he's a genius. And really, Mikey? You could be 'all ass and mouth' for Brian? You are a gargantuan ass and your filthy mouth is already so big you can't shut it even if your life would depend on it!

 

But Deb? I thought of her as being a relatively intelligent woman who at least possesses peasant cunning, but she seems hell-bent to make life unbearable difficult for Brian. Does she not see that if she does not stop, she will gamble away every chance on getting even the tiniest help from Brian and the people of Liberty in the future? Not that I think he would even consider something like that at all anymore.

 

Well, I think, Deb and Michael are something akin to Vampires. These bloodsuckers need feeding, they need someone to give them blood or they wouldn't survive. And the Novontys need People twofold: They prey on the emotional – and in Brian's case even bodily – suffering and are sucking life-energy and joy out of the people around them, family and friends, so they can feel superior. A trait that they share with Lindsay too.

 

And on the other side they need People around them that are successful to a degree, because success equals Money and Money is all they want. They need People who they can manipulate or guilt into financing them because it goes without saying that they 'owe it to us'. Debbie and Michael are contrary to what they say and believe themselves weak, dependent and aren't self-sufficient. Without someone they can feed of they are going to sink… or burn, to stick with the analogy.

 

Yes, yes, I know there are other parts of this chapter but Deb and Michael make my blood boil… and then it goes like this:

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2018 10:51 pm Title: Celebrating Love...What Belongs Together Comes Together

Michael s so delusional might have to come up with a new category for him.

Brian does want to spend his life babysitting a child who thinks comics, comic book movies and comic cons is the end all be all of human existence.

The idea that h thinks he is Highly Intelligent is so laughable because that fool is dreaming.

His IQ is about as high as his mother's which means both make an MM look like Albert Einstein.

No one beyond the age of twelve thinks spending hours talking about comic books is an intellectual conversation.

Michael and his stupid comic are going to end up in the gutter with Mommy.

Lindsay still looking for baby daddy an I hope he treats her the at she treats everyone else she believes is beneath her and I hope he wants the baby but not Lindsay.

Gus is s adorable and Jenny gets her intelligence from her Mel.

Brian and Justin are as hot as ever :)



Author's Response:

Hiya BlueMyst,

Micheal is so full of himself right now. And I guess he always has been.

Please give us an idea of what category you are thinking of. Me? I'm thinking: Even an amoeba on a flee on a dog has more common sense and braincells then Mickey will ever have.

Lindsay will get her come uppance too. We're already working on it.

ANd yes, the kids are really adorable.

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2018 7:17 pm Title: Celebrating Love...What Belongs Together Comes Together

Another fantastic chapter.  Your writing just seems to get better with each chapter and story.  I so enjoy reading them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2018 4:17 pm Title: Celebrating Love...What Belongs Together Comes Together

Food and hot moments: these guys are really a match!

Gus is funny, asking if the dog needs cream on his pink bits.

Michael is nauseating.



Author's Response:

*Handing you one of my barf bags* 

Drat! It's the last one. But don't worry I've got them on backorder already.

I love the way Gus cares out his doggie. My Jack Russell Terrier has had sunburn a couple of times. So yes, my dogs pink bits get sunblock applied when outside in summer.

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2018 1:22 pm Title: Celebrating Love...What Belongs Together Comes Together

The good guys are winning and the bad guys don't have a clue.



Author's Response:

Hiya,

Yep the good guys are winning big!

And the bad guys? Like we say in our neck of the woods: More stupid than the back end of a pig. Completely clueless.

XOXO

Soirsa

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