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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 3:50 am Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

Excellent! So many parts that are great, it's difficult to list all of them.

Ben and the "precious": he knew how to make Michael suffer and kept it secret while preparing the scene.

Gus and Mami: "Aww, are you sured proper sured?".

Brian edging Justin.



Author's Response:

Hiya,

Thank you for the lovely review.

The scene with the "precious" made me love Ben even more then before. He sure knew how to bring Mickey to his knees.
But believe me there is way more for Mickey to come before the end of the story.

Gus and Mami? A match made in heaven.

Brian edging Justin? Hot,  hot, hot!!

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 5:32 pm Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

OMG Michael finally grew a brain and realized he has power...Over his mother anyway, too bad that won't save either of them for the Tsunami that is about to crash over them.

Deb will be so happy to be waiting on Michael again it will be like he never grew up, just the way she kept him for years roflmao

Love that John and Peter want to change their names and want to be known as Kinney-Fitzgerald.

Proud of Brian for standing up and not allowing himself to wallow as a Victim, but fighting back as a Survivor Who Will Never Be Anyone's Victim Again!!!

The Gaggle delivering the notebooks to Arthur keeps Deb and Michael from thinking the notebooks were destroyed.

Miami is terrible but Brian wouldn't trade her for a million dollars lol

The Avenue knows and have been protecting Brian so they have nowhere to hide.

Especially if Gus and Jenny are spending time with Pearl and they have to find somewhere else to be, Genius!!! lol

Ben is cruel and it was  Wonderful, but burning his Precious Captain Astro Comic in front of him was Outstanding!!! <Applause>

Do wonder where and what Ms. Peterson is doing her days are getting numbered and that means she is desperate?

Can Wait For The Next Chapter!! : )                



Author's Response:

Hiya,

I actually whooped in joy when Brian no longer allowed himself to be the victim.

And Ben burning Michaels precious comic? Priceless, wasn't it. It sprayed my tea on my screen when I first read that before nearly peeing myself laughing.

Yep, our Miss Merlot sure knows how to write schadenfreude.

XOXO

Soirsa

 

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 3:40 pm Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

Hello Ladies,


and on to the new developments ...


40.       OOOh yes! It is disturbing how weak WASP men in general seem to be, but Ron finally grows some balls! And he will need them! Whenever Lindsay opens her dirty mouth, the lies just fly out and her mother doesn't seem much better. Well, I'm a woman and I know that almost every woman on this planet works with this very special set of weapons and skills that we have, I even concede that WASP ladies are somewhat more adept in using them in this coy little gender war – but Nancy and Lindsay are definitely well over the appropriate measure! There is nothing coy or sweet about them, they are amoral, malicious and asocial harpies and Ron should get rid of them as fast as he can. It is only right that the Taylors – in essence Justin – set the man straight about the things Lindsay was/is up to so he can react in an appropriate manner.

Ah Claire! Now that she has put her foot down and acts like she wants, that woman is so sweet, big sister and all. It is funny to see that the siblings know their weak spots even after so long … and don't hesitate to use them. And to think that Lindsay believes Claire would side with her! These Times are well and truly over. And yeah, there are blood relations out there who are on Brian's side.


41.       There we go! The first meeting of the new forming Kinney clan takes place. It is a relief that Brian gets a somewhat normal home-live with Justin, the Kids and the rest of the clan… and yes this would be the remains of the old gang plus the Kinney-Fitzgeralds, the Taylors, the BK-Support group(s) and in hopefully not so distant future Ron.

On another note: It is nice to see that John and Peter act like normal Brothers. I bet that under the influence of Grandmother Joan such behavior was not allowed. God forbid the boys could come near each other - bodily and emotionally!

And Claire seems to have hit the Jackpot with Arthur! He has a good job, seems genuine to love her, is relaxed and respectful of the 'people with alternative lifestyles' in her life. And he jumps right into the fire: if Arthur manages and brings the case to a courtroom, there will be no chance in hell that Michael can keep his currently suspended rights to Jenny-Rebecca! They will be permanently withdrawn, because even when he was still a child himself, he was actively abetting the abuse of another child. And it will not help his custody case that his mother did exactly the same thing. Further criminal charges notwithstanding. And these will come and they will go down... hard! Even if there should be finally no conviction, I hope there is extensive reporting in the newspapers - and not only the 'gay' papers! After all, Brian is a respected businessman and important employer in the Pittsburgh area... they will be dead to everyone, nobody will touch them with a pair of pincers. The realtors are already making the start, thanks to Ron!


42.       äh… is Mami really in her seventies? I pictured her as mid-fifties, a little older than Jennifer but in the same general age group. Tall but not to slim, with glasses and a no-nonsense attitude when it comes to people she doesn't like; somehow like Del... or Del's mom if she really is that much older. (oh, by the way: what does 'goosed' mean? Didn’t catch this one.)

It's really sad that Brian is still so haunted by his past - the boys defiantly are right, he needs to speak to someone. It may be a no-go for Brian but maybe Justin can convince him that a Psychologist may help him to overcome the insecurities and the lingering hurt and fears.

Well, Michael and Deb clearly have their priorities straight… even if they seem to differ exceedingly! Deb is still deluding herself in thinking she would be able to step back in her rightful place, when she only can beat Brian and Vic back in shape. Like anybody would take her back! And Michaels ultimate and only concern is money … even his comics aren’t really important. Interpersonal relationships? Fuck them if they don’t do exactly as the godlike Michael DeVore wishes and woe those who dare to have their own mind.

It's refreshing to see how blindly they fall into Vic's carefully designed trap. The fine may not be high but every little incident ultimately sums up to a stalking charge. And look how deeply affected Michael is by the loose of his precious (oh yes, there's a distinctive similarity to Gollum. Does little Mikey wither now, too, since his 'ring' burned in the fires of 'Mt. Highwater'?)

Aaaaaand here we are! Deb begins to see the true colors of her bighearted, selfless and over all measures generous son!! What immeasurable surprise that her standard guilt trip doesn't work on him! He will kick her to the gutter if it so pleases him.

It really really pains me immensely, but I must say that I can't condemn Michael entirely. If this speech would come from Brian I would cheer him on because he isn't completely wrong with his assessment of Debs behavior - because therein lays the root of all the evil...

 

and now I'm waiting impatiently for more


Greetings to you all

Katharina



Author's Response:

Hiya,

Danke schön Kathatrine for yet another great review.

I love the way Brian new family slowly but surely grows and gains strenght. Finally Brian get's the love and attention he yearned for all his life. All of them together will see an end to the terrible trio.

They have dug their grave and now have to lie in it.

I love your Lord of the Rings comment. Yep, Michael has lost his precious along with his mind for who does he think he is for treating his mother like this. Debbie might not be the best of mothers but no child should threat their parent like this.

The only way she can get to him now is by taking away his money for that is the most important thing in his life.

Looking forward to your next review. They are always fun to read.

Bis zum nächsten mal,

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 1:19 pm Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

Amazing.  Michael lost his comic permanently and Deb is getting a taste of her own medicine.  Nice to know that things are looking up for Claire, John, and Peter.



Author's Response:

Hiya,

Claire finding her way back to Brian was a very touching moment in this story. Together with her sons and her new husband she will be a very welcome addition to Brians ever growing family. 

I too am glad she found her way back to her brother and is getting all the happiness she deserves.

Karma is a bitch and Debs is finding that out right now and in my opinion she deserves it. Maybe this will finally make her realise how she has been treating people all these years. Or maybe not..... who knows?

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 10:44 am Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

Great chapter.  Glad to see Mikey & Deb in more trouble.  And, poof, there goes Captain Astro - Yeah !!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hiya,

THank you for your review.

Mikey and Deb should go into hiding for there's loads more trouble coming their way.

And Captain Astro in flames? Burn baby, burn!!!

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 9:42 am Title: The Winner Takes It All The Losers Have To Fall

I hope like hell that Debbie slaps the fuck out of Michael....he has some fucking nerve



Author's Response:

Hiya,

Thank you for our 200th review.

I guess Debbie might be a bit overwhelmed with Michaels reaction but I guess it won't take long for Deb to wake up and slap the living daylights out of Michael. 

No mother deserves to be treated like that by her child. Not even a cunt like Debbie.

XOXO

Soirsa

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