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Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2018 10:58 pm Title: The Tide is Turning...Hide You Worm!

Hi Ladies,

 

Well, so this was great… I'm honest, my impatience reared its head a little, but the wait was worth it! 4 Chapters at once – wow! Impatience is truly satisfied...

 

First I have to make a statement regarding our lovely boys and their developing and thriving relationship because I know that these scenes doesn't feature much in my reviews: I really love those little domestic scenes with Brian and Justin cooking, shopping and generally living a normal life. And of course the hot ones are great as well… but truthfully I must admit that I can't really enjoy them as much as I normally would because I really want to know what happened to the assembled human garbage. I'm chewing nails and hibbel in my seat while reading, because I want to know what happens to them and how long it takes them to finally come to the realization that they have probably really done something wrong… slim chance for that, I know, but well…

 

So… onto the reviews (I have split them this time, because it would simply be too long for a single one)

 

43.       Michael seems to like his little power trip, short-lived as it will be. Pathetic little moron. Is he really thinking Deb would do as he bids? But for her it could be the long overdue reality check, but I doubt it will be. She may be angry over her son's behavior but this will be undoubtedly be anybody else's fault not his and certainly not hers. Anyway, it is really interesting to see how close the two of them are working together toward a common goal… not. Especially Deb seems to do everything to sabotage Michaels footing in this whole mess by contributing to his stalker file amongst other things. At one hand I can understand this because he crossed many lines in his behavior (and to top it off says his mother is fat… well, Mr DeVore is really not an athlete himself!) but it will not bring anything positive for the Grassi/DeVore's if they turn against each other.

Ok, now… the Peterson 'Ladies' are in for a rude awakening. Those two leeches seem to think they are still in the position to manipulate Ron and skim money from him. If the two of them would turn of their superior complex and pay attention to him they would easily see that the man is way above any fear of reputational loose (as Nancy is clearly thinking) and in the process of crafting a future without them. He will bid his time until his grandchild is borne and then he will take actions: divorce Nancy, strip of Lindsay parental rights to the new baby, disinherit her (and maybe even Lynette?). While I can't see Ron raising the Baby, maybe he has a plan for it? I don’t know but there is this nagging feeling that there is a sibling who comes with a great family, many aunts, uncles and additional grandparents... maybe? And how Lindsay and Nancy would spit feathers at that, ha! Aaaaand of course: I'm so looking forward to find out what Roberta's take on the whole situation will be. There's Reinforcement for the gaggle I bet!

Arthur is a godsend to this family. It is evident how disgusted he is over his mother in law and her fellow witch of Pittsburg. He wants to protect his wife and her sons but it is good to see that he doesn't keep secrets. He will bring the Witches and the worm down hard – it's unbelievable that they still think they didn't do any harm or even anything wrong.

I'm really pleased with Claire. She has shaken her past and is the loyal encouraging older sister Brian always deserved. It will be the single most important experience for Brian to have someone blood related to him who will support him thru everything that may come of this…

And YES! One time Jack Kinney reaped what he sowed! And Brian was out the door, never to return – and thanks to Mikey… well, Lady Destiny has a laughing fit!

 

and on to Chapter 44...

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 5:46 pm Title: The Tide is Turning...Hide You Worm!

Deb can't seriously be surprised Michael wants to continue her servitude and his being cruel to her after all she raised him to be a Prince and catered to him whilst putting down others who didn't see Michael the way she saw him and now she is reaping what she sowed.

Looks like Lindsay and Nancy are about to learn from Roberta that you don't hurt or play her Brother and they are going to wish they had never been born lol

Brian is going to get Justice for their actions only wish that Jack was around so he could stand trial too.

The best punishment for Joan besides prison is having to spend eons with Deb and Michael in a cell listening to them and feeling Brian's pain.



Author's Response:

Hey lovely!

You have done it again, you have given us a plot point hopefully it will work!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 4:36 pm Title: The Tide is Turning...Hide You Worm!

I was wondering how long Debbie would last before fighting Michael back; it seems she had enough.

I can't wait to see how Joan will react to what is coming to her.

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