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Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2018 11:00 pm Title: The Raw Occasion...

45.       Hm… should I simply continue with my Chapter 44 rant? Michael really doesn't get it that he isn't wanted around The Avenue? What does he want there? There is nothing for him there! He lies to himself if he thinks there would be anyone who would support his return attempts, but we all know that he isn't brave enough to even really try this. He will wait and hope that Deb will at some time somehow find a way to provide him again with the easy and comfortable life he always lived and of which he is convinced that he is entitled to.

Michaels behavior speaks more and more of an assortment of serious – and considering he is Debbie's son with high probability hereditary – personality disorders; a split personality non the least. He swings from whiney to malice to fearful cowering to aggressive to petulant to... yeah... pick one, it will hit the target...

 

Justin and Brian have taken one major step into their future – raw sex equals a very serious commitment… and it also equals a significant emotional progress on Brian's part.

Emmett is sweat as he discussed this epic event with Ted and Ben. Even if the three of them are making a little fun of it they show quite a bit of respect – as it should be in general. It is great to see how normal they can talk about such delicate things as relationships and emotions if there is no source of interference.

 

So and onto the last one… see you at 46…

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 6:36 pm Title: The Raw Occasion...

Michael why are you crying over that house you hated it?

And Deb shouldn't be too upset since she was planning on Brian buying her a bigger, more gorgeous house anyway.

Sooooo Pathetic!!!! <eye roll>

Ben deserves to be with someone who knows how to rock his world and leaves him Blissed Out Happy and Complete with no ghost of a relationship that will Never Happen. (Granger is man enough to help Ben forget he ever met Michael Novotny)

Just love that Gus and Jenny are editors it is too cute.

Now Brian and Justin were so Hot I bet everyone on Liberty Avenue is fanning themselves and downing lots of ice water <giggles>

Whatever Deb and Michael have planned hope they are prepared for it to be brought up in court.

Ben would make a great counselor but as an author he has enough material from dealing with Deb and Michael for a best seller in horror rofl

I just knew the wait would be worth it, cause you never disappoint, Thanks for the Updates :)



Author's Response:

Hiya

Ben writing a best seller in horror. Brilliant idea!!
It's certainly not going to be a bestseller in the erotic genre for there isn't an erotic bone(r) in Mickey at all.

And yes, I agree on the Blissed Out Happy and Complete for Ben. He so deserves it.

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

Hiya

Ben writing a best seller in horror. Brilliant idea!!
It's certainly not going to be a bestseller in the erotic genre for there isn't an erotic bone(r) in Mickey at all.

And yes, I agree on the Blissed Out Happy and Complete for Ben. He so deserves it.

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 5:35 pm Title: The Raw Occasion...

Indentured Novotonitude! What a great expression!

The last part was so........hot........self-fan needed!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2018 3:15 pm Title: The Raw Occasion...

Read all three chapters.  Great updates.  Just love this story so much and can't wait for the final "fall" of the idiots.

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