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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 6:48 pm Title: Surprise Surprise...A Wish and The Final Kiss Goodnight

Fantastic chapter.  Happy Holidays to you.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 6:11 pm Title: Surprise Surprise...A Wish and The Final Kiss Goodnight

Wow was not expecting that revelation in court but I was worth it to know Michael never win and will never have Brian.

Deb changing her plea is shocking but I don't  trust her.

Brian and Gus had a wonderful party and Gus will be overjoyed that his Daddy and Jussin will be together Beyond Forever :)

Story that this story is nearly over but the end of Michael, Deb, Nancy and Lindsay will be Heavenly!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 2:22 pm Title: Surprise Surprise...A Wish and The Final Kiss Goodnight

Wow, that was a twist I never saw coming.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 5:12 am Title: Gonna Put You Down Where You Belong...

Oh Lordy To Hell!!!  Michael, Michael, Michael! You jealous sociopath! What an idiot. And Brian protected you in school, and this is the thanks for that? Out a kid for being gay??? That was you, you idiot. That word needs to be spread around Boot Camp. Put in the headlines after the next court appearance. HE DESERVES PUNISHMENT!!!

I felt a little squicky when the flashback first started. I was praying, "Lord, Don't let him start the handjob!"  Thankfully you didn't let it go too far. That is one nice thing Deb did for Brian when he was a teenager. Not so much of anything else.

That's right, Pip! Work Him, Work Him!!! Does Michael get to sleep without having his test scores up where Robbie demands them to be??? That's one of the wonders of Boot Camp. They can make you stay awake and do exercises all night, while still making you keep up with your classes during the day! Now he might have to ward off any attackers, too. (I feel evil tonight, sorry.) 

Finally all caught up with your stories, besides skimming through some of the old ones. THAT feels good.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 4:30 am Title: Boots, Boots, Boots, Set to Go Marching Up and Down Again

Loved the use of the pictures.  Ooohh, I had almost forgotten about Michael's decent into Boot Camp. Robbie made certain he was in for a hell of a ride. And what's he trying to pull? As Pip said, when faking, fake well! Christ Michael! This is the Military. They have seen every trick of the trade. It doesn't fly in the Military. Ask my son-in-law. He's a Senior Chief in the Navy, and has quite a few under him. The stuff these guys pull is borderline crazy. It's too bad for the enlisties these days. They just boot them out. Not gonna happen for Michael. They will just work him harder. Did you ever see the movie, "Officer and a Gentleman", in the early 80's? He was slammed in Boot Camp.

Drill him until he pukes or begs for death!  Let The Fun Begin!

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2018 3:46 am Title: Gonna Put You Down Where You Belong...

Great chapter.  Glad that Debbie is finally coming to terms with Mikey.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 7:46 pm Title: Gonna Put You Down Where You Belong...

Where you go Ms. Grassi this will follow you like the hounds of Hell you hands will never be clean from the destruction you allowed to happen by never allowing Michael to grow up and face his responsibilities.

Jack Zyniaf sounds like he was just who Brian needed that moment and he might have a few choice words for Michael, it does make you wonder who else was on Michael's hit list when they got in his way of having Brian all to himself?

And would they like to see Michael get what is coming to him, also makes me wonder if Lindsay hurt others who got in her way in college when Brian didn't pay attention to her?

Michael will never pass those test when it comes to getting who or what he wants he can be quite smart, but when it comes to doing something just himself without any benefits he is a lazy Ass!

He should have to continue those tests in prison too who knows he might actually learn something...But I Doubt It!

Court is going to Very Interesting

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 5:50 pm Title: Gonna Put You Down Where You Belong...

Michael is such a jealous and mean cockroach; if he can't have it/him, then nobody should and destroyed they must be.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 2:15 pm Title: Gonna Put You Down Where You Belong...

Wow, oh just wow!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 8:42 pm Title: The DQ, The Joan Miasma and The Newbie Idiot

all your food makes me hungry and order food, LOL

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2018 6:07 pm Title: A Little Shot of Dutch Courage

Love the story so far

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2018 1:29 am Title: Boots, Boots, Boots, Set to Go Marching Up and Down Again

So naughty and just perfect.  Hope they drill Mikey into the ground.  LOL

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 6:35 pm Title: Boots, Boots, Boots, Set to Go Marching Up and Down Again

Michael was in the military?

Michael is about to learn what it really means to be disciplined and he is going to love it! <evil laugh>

Brian and Justin might have to invent new positions they are going to be through those in a few hours lol

Another day free of court is a day more Freeing than the last.

Will Deb be charged also for attempting to strike Brian and harassing him?

The more time she gets in prison is better for everyone, perhaps she thinks because she made amends in her way that Brian will be willing to have her do less time and he will take care of her later?

Nancy slept with their former lawyer and the father of the baby?

Ewww!!!

How could he get off with the cobwebs between her legs and I bet she and Lindsay sound the same when they come?<shudders>

Ewww Ewww Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!

 

Thanks for the Update;)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 5:07 pm Title: Boots, Boots, Boots, Set to Go Marching Up and Down Again

Michael was in the military?  Can't wait to find out more.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2018 9:46 pm Title: Wise Words from a Wise Kid

Really nice chapter. I'm glad Brian had the boys to help him understand, and get a grip on the whole 'feeling like he did something wrong'. Nobody could connect with him like that, unless it happened to them to. I also think it has a lot to do with them being family. Brian has never trusted easily, so with the boys being his nephews, he would attempt to listen to them a little better.

Thanks for the chapter update. I hope life is getting easier for you.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2018 9:12 pm Title: Wise Words from a Wise Kid

Great update.  Terrific writing.  Always look forward to a new chapter.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2018 6:51 pm Title: Wise Words from a Wise Kid

Peter and John coming to talk to Brian as good they all have to say, shout, believe that they aren't to blame for others misery and self-loathing.

They are loved because they send love out into the world and they send more then they expect in return.

Deb, Michael, Joan, Jack, John Senior and Lindsay chose to see the burdens around their neck instead of the blessings they were given, and they chose to punish the ones they considered blights to their happiness, instead of looking in the mirror and seeing that every bad thing that has happened is their fault, not an innocent baby who did not ask to be born.

Deb used Brian to save herself from facing the truth that she crippled Michael before he was born and by doing that she crippled herself, by treating Michael like an angel despite his bratty behavior it as easy to put the blame on an abused kid who saw a crumb of love as more precious than gold.

Deb saw Brian as her escape from having to always cater to Michael then when Brian started rising above Michael she tried to knock him down, but Brian always had more strength so when he achieved his dreams she saw Brian's money as hers and his reputation as her due for bandaging up, feeding him and giving him shelter.

And Michael as her minion saw Brian as his and expected his due too for Allowing Brian into his life.

All they saw is what they could take but none of them saw The Real Brian, because if they acknowledged how strong Brian he really become despite their attempts then he would leave them behind and they would be nothing.

See it isn't just the money they want they want the charisma, intelligence, kindness, strength and tenacity Brian has to fight to LIVE.

They want the polish Brian was born with but they never achieved.

Hell even Lindsay craved it and she was born with privilege, but despite the silver spoon she couldn't pull off the inherent grace Brian possessed, she used trickery and her open legs to get ahead, Brian did it with sheer determination.

Brian never expected the world to hand him anything which is why he cherishes everything he gets, because he earned it from.his reputation on Liberty Avenue to his reputation as an honest hardworking Adman, the others expect it to be handed to them on gold platters and don't appreciate what has already been given because they want more.

That is why they will always lose and Brian will always win. 

They need Brian in order to be seen but Brian didn't need them at all.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2018 1:37 pm Title: Wise Words from a Wise Kid

Out of the mouth of babes.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2018 8:20 pm Title: It's The Sure-Stenck Ejection for You and Contentment for Them

Great chapter.  love this story.  Happy Thanksgiving

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 6:23 pm Title: It's The Sure-Stenck Ejection for You and Contentment for Them

Gus, his Daddies and Tyson just had me smiling with Happiness they are all so cute together.

Nice surprise that the lawyer was one of Lindsay's playmates and that he has willing signed over his rights to Lynette while also screwing Lindsay and her Mommy over.

If Nancy talking about money I doubt she has enough to set hers elf up in luxury.

Lindsay is ready to cut the ties that bind to her older, sagging doppelganger but will it be that easy considering what each knows about the other?

And where does Lindsay think she is going without her favorite thing in her hands... well besides cock?

Or does the Whore have another plan up her sleeve?

 

Charlie Boy overplayed his hand and he got bit hard no one will listen to him now.

Everyone getting away from the circus and having a few days of peace is just what they all needed to regroup and get a breather from all the stupidity.

Another Fantastic Update :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 2:57 pm Title: It's The Sure-Stenck Ejection for You and Contentment for Them

Interesting chapter.  Love that Gus is back.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 2:05 pm Title: It's The Sure-Stenck Ejection for You and Contentment for Them

Gus is just cutest personified. It made me happy reading about his time with his daddies.

You sure stuck it to Lindsay. To say I was chuckling reading about the attorney, is an under-statement. I just loved this, 

Recognized you straight away, the hair flick and that breathy voice you use when you get worked up. We fucked twice, I couldn't go a third time, not because you exhausted me as I said, but because I was bored. I hoped you would get better, but nope you didn't.

Oh lord. I can just see the disgusted, horrified look on her face. It makes ne laugh all over again.

And touché to Leo for putting that slimeball, Charlie Boy Stenck in his place, Finally. He was a menace to the guys earlier in the locker room, so he's finally got his just deserts.

“Cum Tigger, cum, Tigger, Tigger cum cum!” That was HOT, HOT, HOT, HOT!!!!

Very Good Chapter!  Thank you so much!

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2018 7:06 pm Title: Nobody Loves You Better Than Us

Read both new chapters and they are wonderful.  So happy that Linds & Mikey are getting the pay back they deserve.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2018 5:41 pm Title: Nobody Loves You Better Than Us

Gus is just adorable!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2018 5:25 pm Title: The Joys of Parapraxis

Gotcha! He shot himself in the foot! What a dumb guy!

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